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Check in by: 03-02-05 at 02:09 AM

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Black Heart has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 02:15 AM.

I feel sorry for this flop, he be begs interent girls like "Please-Date"......
Your not hot, only thing I'm feeling from philly is their "Cheese-Cake".....
Bullets are flying, and there not going to stop until it "Hits-your-Cranium"
The trigger i'll pull it and leaving you dying, next to the "76ers-Staduim"...
My cats..wit..gats, might "stop-your-way" leave you in i.c.u in philly but your not getting worked on by "Dr-Jay"..
Leave your *team-flat" my gats make them *lean-back* like the "Roca-way".....
You might won a few battles, but you ain't "Surving-Tonight"....
Because when my crew rattles, we put you 6 feet like "Iversons-Height".....

Explain....

He from Philly so...
Philly Cheesecake = Tourist attraction everyone goes to philly for these.
76ers Staduim = The Nba Team for philly
Dr Jay = Nba Legend who played for Philly
Allen Iverson = The new Nba star for philly, he is 6 foot
He only dates girls on the internet

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..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 02:33 AM.

dumbest person ive met,what Cripspells shit with a Ck?
its time fa crew drops he always make tha cut like Djs
he ran from kali to bite a line that was made by Snoop
Goes around comes around,i bust on ya chick now tha nut is on you
Look fam you trash tha net fucked his girl he handled last
He cant attract facts when he spits shit like camels ass
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Doing math problems is tha closest you'll get to ..Exponent..

Tha fuck i date on tha net?lmao i never had a net girl a day in mih life lol thats a fake personal and that Philly line is played you talked about Philly ya whole verse shits gay.

HaHa Dem bars still killed you! LoL Uppin For Votes

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/blackheart704music.htm YES I AM SICK!

Voted For: Black Heart

Black Heart

I feel sorry for this flop, he be begs interent girls like "Please-Date"......
Your not hot, only thing I'm feeling from philly is their "Cheese-Cake".....
^nice opener...

Bullets are flying, and there not going to stop until it "Hits-your-Cranium"
The trigger i'll pull it and leaving you dying, next to the "76ers-Staduim"...
^uhm, okay okay

My cats..wit..gats, might "stop-your-way" leave you in i.c.u in philly but your not getting worked on by "Dr-Jay"..
Leave your *team-flat" my gats make them *lean-back* like the "Roca-way".....
^1st line's dope, second falls off lil

You might won a few battles, but you ain't "Surving-Tonight"....
Because when my crew rattles, we put you 6 feet like "Iversons-Height".....
^hehe,good closer

Had dope personals in there,kept on playing the Philly-thing...very consistent with that Was feeling your flow,vocab was tight and structure was good. Punches were nice, not too played, only bar I wasn't really feeling was the second one. Tight battle for sure!


Rebel

dumbest person ive met,what Cripspells shit with a Ck?
its time fa crew drops he always make tha cut like Djs
^okay opener

he ran from kali to bite a line that was made by Snoop
Goes around comes around,i bust on ya chick now tha nut is on you
^nice nice

Look fam you trash tha net fucked his girl he handled last
He cant attract facts when he spits shit like camels ass
^decent bar

Before you register to a site check to c all your opponents
Doing math problems is tha closest you'll get to ..Exponent..
^good closer

Had some good stuff in there,nice punches and personals but they weren't always that hardhitting in fact. Had some creativity going on there, structure was nice as well as your vocab and flow.But my vote goes to Black Heart because I was feeling his lines (with all the Philly stuff in it) bit more...no hate and please return the favor...

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/blackheart704music.htm YES I AM SICK!

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/blackheart704music.htm YES I AM SICK!

Voted For: Black Heart

ight this was an 1-sided battle 2 me no hating:
flow-blackheart, was structured betta a lil bit, & it made
it sound alot betta
punches- black's were pretty decent, while rebel was
played out
personals- black had alot more, & were betta, while
rebel's were pretty lame & didn't form 2getha
2 well u need elevation
multies- obviously black, his type of rhyme scheme, will
almost always win, rebel u should take a look &
u'll c what i'm talkin' bout
vocab- rebel it was lacking & u need 2 work on it; while
black's was ok needs elevation also but it was
enuff 2 win my vote
originality- overall the lines from both were played in
sum areas & also need 2 work on their
structure

make sure 2 return the favor

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Voted For: Black Heart

black heart:
ok verse.came strong, hard punches.
some of your lines were strecthed, but at least they made sense.opener was my favorite line. multis were good but you shouldnt have to stretch ya lines.
but overall good verse.

exponent:
horrible verse. most of it didnt even make sense.
i didnt even see one decent punch.
your suppose to embarress the other kat,
not ya self. not to much i have to say to you.
but keep elevating.

v/ black heart

return tha favor....
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