Crazy Raps

i use fake wordplay just so it appears that i make meanings
and i just murdered the mic...for real...it aint breathing
if any faggot comes around with fake lyrics...dammit ima love it
on a diet watchin MC's that i eat..eyes duct taped to my stomach
i appear and they stare...i havent even reached my damn peak
act like i slit their eyelids with dull razors...see...they cant blink
go from being on toppa the world...to feelin like my minds fried
shit...my life's had more up and downs than New York's skyline
so in this short span i just slide by...living proof that time flies
feel like every single minute's my last...nah...fuck it ill buy time
havent hit a point of puberty in your lyrics...no sign of a mustache
so i remove the hair from their head...and attache it to their nut sacks
so they can act as if their full grown...clappin all these fools domes
tagging on a prostitutes shirt..is the only way you fools pull ho's
most these faggots write raps for attention...just cause it sounds cool
and i lyrically exercise daily...so i can literally run circles around you


just felt like writing some off the wall stuff today....leave feed please

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1997078
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1997089

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nice, i like odd shit like dat....i would like dat in audio, be'd dope

ESTABLISHMENT *STAND~UP*

^ word, pretty solid for a random spit....read it quickly, so i'll leave more later WIRD

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thanks for the feed.....and morse....i probably am gonna put this on audio....make it longer...and just go for like 2 or 3 minutes of spitting random weird shit....its gonna be dope

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werd, i do it all the time, lol...uppin for dis mayne...chea!

that shit was kinda hot, i'd like to hear how you would spit that in audio cz it's a great some for being random shit lol. it was easy to read and pretty funny at times and you used good meta's. overall good song 8.5/10

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^^^ thanks for the feed........uppin for more

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hott shit.. you kidna fell off at some parts but picked it up.. and i mean whats bad about crazy shit? nothing... thats what.. lol, i liked it though, we gotta collab sometime

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^^^ yea we will definitely collab sometime....just hit me up with the topic....and we will drop something dope....

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yo this shit was pretty good hommie...nice flow ta it and wordplay was just crisp on point fam....structure was on point..vocab was in good use...overall this was not bad at all

i give ya a 8/10

^ yeah, man, now i'll post my feed. this was actually really good for some random shit....its a nice change when everything else in the forum is dissing and about 'niggas', you know....flow was great, you seem to have that down, seemed like you weren't that consistent the whole way through (if that was possible with your topic)....but some parts were a bit dull, like the slitting of eyelids, haha, wasnt feeling that....but the rest of it was good, laughed at some parts too................keep writing more shit man, that was dope, ahhahaha, puberty line was the best, haha

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lol yea it was kinda wack....but still funny as hell....which would be the purpose of this so......doesnt matter if its funny

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i like that shit kinda like a "my name is" joint...lyrical prowlness with no teeth...keep that shit and drop the audio....keep elevatin...

peace

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