Voted For: static

tough decish....hes what i see

HNIC
>Defeat me...Mission Impossible, stop b-4 I huve u yellin "Save me"
I'm quick with the retort...so abort this mission like a baby
-pretty weak, decent thou, 5/10
>Insisted on battlin...now u gon die without a fight
Paramedics screamin shit like..."Don't go to the light"
-weak, 4/10
>A fuckin shame he's such a lame and tha Nigga's from Brooklyn
Get on tha bus, cuz I got game, like the director from Crooklyn*
-not that bad, 6/10
>See I electrify millions, while static shocks in groups of three
And the only time he's seen on screens is on the WB**
haha, nice creativity....7/10

overall: 22/40....not a bad drop, only thing i think lost you this battle was how, hard you came, your punches just seemed a little weak, didnt' really have any personals in there, so thats why you didnt get this one, i suggest working on wordplay and vocab and that will add more effectiveness to your drops

static
>He's so wack, in this battle I'll get by great
If skill was judged in size, this kid is a flyweight
-decent punch, first line coulda been better 7/10
>Nigga don't even test me, I'm really not in the mood
Nobody cares about you, you're rotting, like left-over food
-blahh, not feelin it.....4/10
>I'm the King of this bitch, man, jus you try to taunt
And you'll end up feelin' blue, like yo username font
-not bad, creative 5/10
>Cats all kno I'm sick, like you and yo mom fuckin'
You're a bitch like Paris Hilton, but the world don't see you suckin'
aha, i laughed at this, nice closer 8/10

overal: 24/40....i thought you came harder with your punches, and thats basically why you came away with my vote, you had better wordplay/vocab, and shots you took were more effective.......both had good flow/structure though

v/static

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Voted For: H-N-I-C

okay battle....hnic takes dis with his creativity and personals....static dat lil hnic shit was cool but dat was all u had ya lines were 2 basic and u didn't have no personals...

opener-hni
structure-stat
punchlines-hni
creativity-hni
multis-nun from both
flow-stat
personals-hni
finisher-hni..good personal good of worded it betta
enjoyed- hni....nuff said

RETURN DA VOTE LINKS R IN MY SIG...IF NOT I'LL GET MY VOTE TAKEN AWAY

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: static

you win, but yoru so lucky that guy was so damn wack,

static, you was OK not good more like 4/10 and he was more like1/10
so its obvous you win, only becuase of your structure, if you had wack structure like him then you would have lost badly,

so HNIC fix your structure
ohhh yeah that wack shit down the line, dont when battles, dumb shit

RTF
on one of my battles in my Sig

Voted For: H-N-I-C

H-N-I-C win this battle because of the wordlay and i liked his 3rd line it connected good closer personal connected only thing i dint like was

"so abort this mission like a baby" it didnt make sense

static you attemted a personal with the antonym but it didnt work was kinda weak messed up your whole verse could have had better metas most of our lines just weren't on target

v/ H-N-I-C


return the favor on my battle versus aurora i took the time for you so dont drop a vote thats gona get disqualiffied

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Preciate tha honesty.....uppin........................

okay since niggaz dont wanna return da favor and vote on my battle...im force da get my vote taken away...ya niggaz is da worst and hnic ur trash

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^^he's scared.lol

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Damn....lets get some votes on this shit..............