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5 | 83.33% |
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03-04-05, 06:01 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 2703 8246
uupppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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03-04-05, 07:06 PM
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#17
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New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Magical
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
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03-05-05, 12:41 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
uppin............................................. .....
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03-05-05, 05:54 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
uppin.............................................
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03-05-05, 10:59 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Magical
Speats I Wasn't Feeling Ya Verse Man, You Had Some Alright Vocabulary And All But I Wasn't Feeling Your Punches Try And Up On That Man, Your WordPlay Was Horrible Man Try To Read More Battles, Also Your Structure, Man You Need To Elevate On That Coz It's Horrible, You Need To Use Personals To, Over All Your Verse Was Basic Affinity Good Verse Man, You Had punches, Punches Was There And Was Hitting Hard, You Had Ya Personals Which I Enjoyed Reading, Vocabulary Nice Man, Hey!! Me And You Almost Alike With The Structure, Lol Weerd, Well Your Word Play Was There I Could Read Everything Clead, You Had Some Good Meta's Over All Your Verse Was More Advanced Vote-Affinit, No Hate Peace Man
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03-05-05, 11:02 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot, but actually i think are stucture is the same, im better wit stucture on my topicals go read them under Parallel
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03-05-05, 11:20 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: DC2A 83C5
i didnt have any word play...i think lol but apreciate it still,thanks atleas you voted
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03-06-05, 07:29 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo uppin..........................................
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03-09-05, 12:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 522A 016B
Voted For: Magical
Voted for Affinity Affinity got this due to a more serious approach on his verse, he was to the point had sum ight punches, a good flow, descent structure not many multies though Speats ya verse was ight had a few nice punches but ya verse was lackin severity the whole michael jackson nose thing nah wasnt feelin it fam. Ight strucutre no multies that i saw Affinity Bes Line: Why u jumpin off to temptation, ur way to judgemental Ur so played out u remind me of a wack Instrumental (lil soft but nice for a opener) Speats worse line: Ill traught lyrics deeper than michael jackson's nose Youll finish ugly enought to open your own"Magical Show" (nah dude what was that all about, not feelin it) Overall Punches- Affinity Flow-Tie Structure- Tie Multies- None Aggression- Affinity Aggression is sumtin i vote on now a days jus the severity of the verse (ex. Comical, Severe, Wack etc......) Give Affinity a 8/10 on the verse Give Speats a 6/10 on his verse Good Battle fams Not Hatin, Jus Votin |
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03-09-05, 12:33 PM
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#25
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 3E91 F3D5
Voted For: Magical
Affinity Why u jumpin off to temptation, ur way to judgemental Ur so played out u remind me of a wack Instrumental ^2nd line's funny, 1st's bleh... Ur so dumb, u put cigarette buds in urself, ur so retarded U touch little boys?, like a Queer, don’t even get started ^okay okay I’m Napolean Dynamite when it comes to Explodin u yea I got a 12 gage thats why im the gun, controlling u(1) ^not really feeling it Yo bitch let me borrow a Light, ill burn ya just to Shine Ur played like a fatties boobies, sick, “she jiglin like a lime”(2) rofl...shit made me laugh... I can imagine u Vomiting over a fat women with Bulimic(3) Ur like a baby Wining, off that Liquor like an annoying mimic good closer Okay, had good punches but no real personals which is a shame in fact. But your punches made up for that cause you had nice creativity, hardly had played stuff in there. Some weren't that hardhitting but they were all from a quite high level. Structure's good just like your vocab, was also feeling your flow. Solid drop! ----------------------------------------------------------------- SpeatsBeats This is only the first line,dont get to nervous I could image your ass jumping around in a circus ^2nd line's decent, ugh at first one Your getting annoying,and im only being honest Parallel should shut is mouth,let me ask the dentist* ^aight,again 2nd better than first line He could brake some teeth and put new vocabulary in it Then go buy new and serious shit at the clinic ^liking first line,2nd falls off Ill traught lyrics deeper than michael jackson's nose Youll finish ugly enought to open your own"Magical Show" ^lmao, funny stuff... Poeple d'be ready to pay alot of money to see your ass in there Then after,Buy a mic and stop complaining dat its a parent affaire* ^Haha,liking your closer Okay, you kinda came through at the ending because those last 2 bars were real good. Too bad you kinda had a slow start there, because one of the lines in those bars were good but the other one ruined the whole thing almost all the time. Shame in fact because you tried some personals and creative punches but in the beginning, it just wasn't working out too well. Try to get at level you had in the ending from the start 'cause definately like those last 2 bars. Structure, vocab and flow were straight on point though. No hate... Please RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177089, thanks...
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