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Old 03-04-05, 08:51 PM   #1
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Cool Homies Dig This

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verse:
yo...i keep my raps fast and steady
I'm always ready ta slash fools with O.J's machete
your blood be squartin' like sauce and veins hangin like spagetti
so get ready for what i just said B
cuz i'll overdramatize you
pulverize you
i'll beat you to a fuckin' meat patty like Mcdonald's fast food
leave you black n' blue
i always knew you were supersized but looks like you grew
and believe in me homie you don't wanna duel
cuz when i battle i'll leave ya playing with your drool
i keep my style in a mixture of old n' new school
i'm dat fire and if you beef with me you'll just add that fuel
so next time you come beefin' you better check yourself fool

(2x) hook:
i'm ill, dope, and wicked
got an ill verse then spit it
got a voice then sing shit
and if you freestyle then wing it
no matter what the homies' gonna dig it


verse 2:
when you pop off at the mouth u better come prepared
cuz with all these cliques will leave you tremblin' and scared
tear out your eyes leave your vision impaired
now your faggot ass comes to me on knees?? before you never cared
always war you declared, you always stood and stared
guns blaired always being cross-haired
added fuel to the flame now i'm the one ta blame?
whateva, fuck ya i just came in ta fulfill my claim of fame
which is ta take over this fuckin' game
everybody bein' hardasses over the eternet
i bet half of ya would be dead if you fled across this set
catch the taste of lead and take off your head
more than half of ya'll is fakes
you think you got what it takes??
for christ sakes
i''ll eat ya for breakfast like Frosty Flakes



(2x) hook:
i'm ill, dope, and wicked
got an ill verse then spit it
got a voice then sing shit
and if you freestyle then wing it
no matter what the homies' gonna dig it

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Old 03-04-05, 09:21 PM   #2
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pretty good.. nothin all that eye ctaching though but i liek to see alot of multiples... overall i liked it though, but you gotta work on that structure man.. i kepe tryna tell you
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Old 03-04-05, 10:51 PM   #3
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yo uppin on feedback
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Old 03-05-05, 02:59 PM   #4
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yo more feedback ya'll startin ta get lazy
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Old 03-05-05, 05:01 PM   #5
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feedback have someone else type for a change
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