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Old 03-06-05, 11:18 PM   #1
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Post Where I Come From

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everybody scrambles cuz i leave their life in shambles
everybody's betting they're gonna win battles as if their life was all gambles
ya'll actin' like animals as if NOK was all cannibals
inspired by movies like Scarface and Hannibal
ya'll runnin your mouth that it's unmanagable and unimaginable
it took us this long ta get here and ya'll still can't get along
ya'll openin' your mouth always sayin' sumthin wrong
ya'll like beef u can't deny it
so much that you'd start a riot and no one can get by it
if u take a look at my text record i'm scoring
if you wanna battle all i can do is give a warning
piss me off enough i'll clap ya and have your blood pouring
i keep my shit interesting ya'll rappaz keep your shit boring
been on this site since morning, sittin' mourning
cuz my best friend's life got tooken away
he couldn't get away in time before the guns sprayed
thought i had everything, thought i was ok, that i was made
till we heard the sound of the grenade
the homie that left us betrayed
use ta be down now rather watch us drown
it was bound ta happen and it happened just now

hook:
where...i come....fruuUm
you always have ta look for a.... guun
whether we runnin' or thuggin we always...have fuuunn
we got drama and.....you got nuuun

verse 2:
can't wait ta have a baby daughter
that remembers everything i taught her
and not get spoiled from all the dolls i bought her
and never sins even if i wouldnt of caught her
whenever that day be i pray she doesn't become like me
i might even have a boy..maybe but no matter what i want my own baby
and that he or she'll be as strong as the navy
one day i might look back and smile at all the things she gave me
just the thought of when that is turns my heart into gravy
so much that light's getting wavy, and my vision goes hazy
through all these days of survival and reading the bible
helps me for the day i go ta heaven
when i can look down and have fun knowin i didnt have ta carry a gun


hook:
where...i come....fruuUm
you always have ta look for a.... guun
whether we runnin' or thuggin we always...have fuuunn
we got drama and.....you got nuuun
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Old 03-06-05, 11:21 PM   #2
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decent ryhmes,,... good hook too... sitll gotta work of that structure, im sure this would sound better on audio but overall good shit man...keep droppin sick shit
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Old 03-07-05, 12:54 AM   #3
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uppin..........
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Old 03-07-05, 02:40 AM   #4
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yeah had some nice shit here homie structre was a off but nice flow and rhymin was sick kid ill give it a 7.5/10 (woulda been a 8.5/10 if it wasnt for the structre)
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