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MaRVJay1009 5 100.00%
medicine 0 0%
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Old 03-07-05, 11:38 PM   #16
M&rk
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

you medicine, decent drop, you got potential, even though you didn't do anything your sopposed to in a battle... at least not at this site, but you got a good example by lookin at what marv just spit.

marv- wordplay every fuckin bar, thats just fuckin fire right there, one of the best verses i've ever heard. fuckin solid all the way through.
only problem you had is that not very many were direct punches. dope lines but if they aint directly aimed at the kid its pretty much filler, good filly but still filler.
when he go 2 a chick crib they dont let em sit on da couch
...........fam u neva got "head"
only when da girl "Sick" she put "medicine in her mouth".....
^^^ya only real personal and real punch
dont talk let ya pumps spray me...but i think son crazee.....
he a aol feen stay with da "net on his head" like "lunch lady's"
^^^ punch but made up personal, still dope.
u'll neva have a rap career quer wont neva tour da state...
and u "PiSSED" off cuzz on a scale 2 a million "UR-N-EiGHT"..
^^^ dont understand what the 8 is

all and all you spit dope lines even without many direct punches and a few lines pretty much self glor... like
u madd cuzz dis bastard's hott...but when i flash da glok
medicine u betta give me more "space" than "astronauts
^^^ but still dope wordplay

ite, ko... but, med keep that flow goin and take some lessons on punches and you'll be droppin some hot shit.

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