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Old 03-12-05, 08:11 PM   #1
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Nok Out Kingz..we ridin, yall dyin (MUST PEEP..flow is 2 sick!!!)

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*yall betta watch ya back...dis a RV stick up niggaz...reppin NOK to tha fullest ya know?...new shit...yall ready?...iight BOUNCE*

READ IT ALL AND LEAVE FEED!!!

[hook]
Nok Out Kingz..we ridin, yall dyin
we sprayin yall away like broken fire hydrants
and if u dont like tha way we do
go to anotha muthafuckin site fool!
-repeat 2x-

[verse 1]
recanize my real, real flows by tha ship load
and i spit game and get mo thongs than sisquo
yall niggaz need to get off my dick slow
befo you get popped by my trusty ass 4-4
it aint shit dat ya will know if i dont say it
me and my son love hoes plus we break shit
and dats tha truth, did it knock u out ya boots bitch?
cuz if it did i got some 'crunk juice' dat get u 'low' quick
most of yall know my flow and what im bout
so we can call this tha 'tryout' from tha horse mouth
and i say dat like N-O-K aint grab ya boy
they seen my past open mics bout blastin toys
but this one here is right from my stash
i jus twisted it a bit from my rap notes of tha past
and please believe dat i want tha crown i deserve
tha one where i care bout mine and give a fuck bout urs (lets go!)

[hook]
Nok Out Kingz..we ridin, yall dyin
we sprayin yall away like broken fire hydrants
and if u dont like tha way we do
go to anotha muthafuckin site fool!
-repeat 2x-

[verse 2]
(u still here?)..word to ya mothaz
even ya sistaz-cuzzin's-brothaz-girl is feelin dis brotha
cuz they know dat i will be tha illest teen from tha D
plus i got my broz and internet niggaz behind me
my flow is crispier than foot-lockers short-sleeve tees
plus i get mo bread than fine black pornstars knees
i got tha rap sheets dat otha niggaz envy
my liquor tank is full even tho my bottle is empty
and dat there proves my style is betta than most
cuz money matches my flow like butter sticks to toast
we know dat im rich, how much should i boast?
maybe i'll keep goin til death gets close
and all i gotta do is rap at school shows
and pick up groupie hoes, yall know how dat go
but as long as Doe Bagz is breathin and i can still spit
my flow will be sicker than a AIDS and SARS mix (cmon)

[hook]
Nok Out Kingz..we ridin, yall dyin
we sprayin yall away like broken fire hydrants
and if u dont like tha way we do
go to anotha muthafuckin site fool!
-repeat 2x-

*and dats bout it niggaz...seems like i elevate by tha week right?...haha to tha sorry nigga BLACK and his crew tha otha day...tryin to come to my school and got they asses beat...why u think he neva here...nigga is still pussy...haha!!!...im out niggaz...please, put ya hands down now...thank u*
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Old 03-12-05, 08:16 PM   #2
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i used tha beat from Fat Joe's-"so much more"...party track maybe?...lmao

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Old 03-12-05, 08:28 PM   #3
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Old 03-12-05, 09:01 PM   #4
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it was cool, some of the lines was decent, good flow and structure, metas not as good as your others, but still good...not your best but decent...7.5/10 RTF on any or all of the below...
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Old 03-12-05, 09:04 PM   #5
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A shit was good nice structure nice voacb nice flow it was hot! Holding down the family so you know thats a plus I loved the hook shit was hitting! Tony Green gives it a 8/10
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Old 03-12-05, 09:09 PM   #6
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thanx yall...remix will be up sooner than later!...uppin

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Old 03-12-05, 09:11 PM   #7
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A yo D Bagz recruit Tony Green for the remix holla at me!
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Old 03-12-05, 09:24 PM   #8
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iight den...post ya verse in my thread...its in tha family only forum in NOK...go there
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Old 03-12-05, 09:54 PM   #9
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yo shit was good i'd give it a 7.5/10 cuz u had some decent punchlines and flow was on and it all went togetha nicely keep it up yo RTF with my "Fulfillin my dream" or "Keepin it Real", they're both fairly brand new
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Old 03-12-05, 10:04 PM   #10
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iight den thanx fam...uppin

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Old 03-12-05, 10:43 PM   #11
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uppin...

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Old 03-13-05, 05:07 PM   #12
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uppin...

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Old 03-17-05, 11:27 AM   #13
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