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0 | 0% |
~High-Dro~ |
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5 | 100.00% |
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
Voted For: ~High-Dro~
good battle.. heres the break down.. high - you had good flow, realli nice vocabulary, good punches and an awsome opener and closer... phive - you had an alright flow, alright punches and that but ya structure and punches laced a bit more than Highs verse.. opener - phive closer - high punches - high flow - high structure - high vocabulary - high enjoyment - high vote - high yo phive no hate man, u kno i give u mad respect but high gets this battle sorry homie.. ![]()
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
Voted For: ~High-Dro~
This was one of the best verses i seen from phive but he was totally outdone in this. Il break it down bar-by-bar: open: Phive's was alrite, seemed quite basic, no wordply, multis, or metaphor used but a good punch. High-Dro's opener smashed it up! Really nice metaphor to make a great personal punch that hit hard. 1st Bar: High-Dro Middle bar: Phives was cool, better than the opener. Good punch, nicely done. High-Dro had a nice metaphor but the punch wasnt hitting as hard and didnt come off too well. Middle Bar: Phive Closer: Phive attempted mutlis here i think which i wasnt feeing at all. In my opinion your closer wasnt good, phive, the punch sucked. High-Dro had a quality closer which clinched it for him. Well worded punchline, with good set-up. Nice goings high-dro took it. Closer: High-Dro
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: ~High-Dro~
i'ma win this battle bitch, this is a joke, you aint even a challenge your name is only 'phive' cuz u one-tenth of 50 cent's lyrical talent ^^^LOL DOPE...GOOD OPENER today voters will hear u screamin, like when ur fucked in the penitentiary when it comes to RV losses, homie, you're the quarter man of the century ^^^OKAY LINE you must be underrated cuz i checked your sig and it said ur a "lyrical master" on second thought, maybe you're just mentally challenged or a "satirical bastard" ^^^IF U WOULN'DT OF EXPLAINED IT I WOULD OF SAID IT WAS WACK BUT SINCE U DID..I SAY IT WAS AN OKAY CLOSER.. High dro, imma knock out ya lights, and leave you no flow, fuck bro, same used rhymes, i though so, stop dick ridin, Homo ^^^2 BASIC FAM.. With aliases up ya ass causin constipation, you tryin ta be #1 internet rapper, with no education, a loser from day one, ^^LOL OKAY fucking bitch, ya sister makes a betta son, gettin ya crew ta vote for you, you wont do, cheating for you, alias Who? ^^^DIDN'T RYHME SO U JUST WASTED A LINE.. OVERALL:i gotta go with dro he had more creativity in his verse a couple punchlines....phive all u had was one funny line datz it... LINK IN MY SIG RETURND A FAVIR OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: ~High-Dro~
ight this was an 1-sided battle all the way out no hate: flow- high-dro, was structured betta, & made it sound good punches- phive ur's were played, & dro urs was played a lil but not all the thru tho personals- dro had more & were betta, phive were pretty lame & didn't 2 good 2getha, also u shouldn't separate ur lines so much multies- obviously, dro can win by his type of rhyme scheme, cuz his flow & multies will win, u should look very close & u'll c phive vocab-both were lacking in sum places, & need elevation but dro took this category by far originality- overall both verses were ok, but dro won my vote by coming harder in his verse wit all the thangz i listed; while phive u were lacking but work on it & u'll get it |
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