Will there ever be a end to everyone’s pain,
Everyone around here is going insane.
Who’s to blame when everything goes wrong,
No matter what goes on we all have to stay strong.
We’re put on this world to live our lifelong,
So why won’t everybody just try and get along.
There’s to much stuff for people to take,
People are thinking their whole life is a mistake.
Hearts always get broken everyday,
Just wishing everything would be okay.
There’s way to much stress,
It’s leaving everybody hopeless.
Just praying for a better and brighter day,
Soon all our pain will be taken away.

ya flow was aiight u still need to work on it a lil though,juss keep
goin u gon get betta as u keep rappin but i give u 7/10

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Your flow was still kind of off structure got alot better keep elevatin you gone get better with time 6/10 was better than the last one.

Repay the favor please! Links in sig!

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Thank you . . . . . . . uppin this page . . . . . .

. . . . . Upppin this pageeeee. . . . . . . . . . .

not bad............likein it......but i agree wid nas on his tin about structure,,,,,,,,,,,overall u gud piece,,, dnt stop

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thanks . . uppiin