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03-19-05, 12:14 AM
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Please Return the Favour with an honest vote on my topical, the link is in the sig.
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03-20-05, 12:10 AM
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uppin this shiz for some votes yep....
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03-20-05, 04:16 AM
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
this was an okay battle kamikazee...i thought your biggest weakness, was your use of wordplay and creativity with your punches...they came off real simple, nothing special, you had some good ideas going, but you were lacking in the vocab and wordplay, which lessened the effect of your shit....nothing wrong with your flow and structure, you got that down...just try to up the wordplay...and come up with more creative punches, because overall, it was kinda a drag to read.......although, your finisher was pretty hot, good bar there....but flow took this round flow....hot drop man....the wordplay was amazing, but you also had a few iffy punches....but you stayed consistent, you had more connecting punches/personals, very effective punches too....your flow was great, structure, nothing wrong....tic tac toe line....was kinda whack with the rest of your verse....last 3 bars, thought were the hottest, flowed nicely too....the only criticism i can come up with is....through some multies in there, and maybe up the vocab even....but overall, you took this one for sure v/flow intel............rtf if you get the chance....wordizzle
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03-20-05, 02:41 PM
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good look ill return all the votes now upping this
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03-21-05, 09:30 AM
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Iight everybody is sayin its a good battle and everybody is voting for him......WTF is up wit dat shit.....can we say DR's da reason i cant get a good record anymore cuzz da DR's done took over da site......~1~ UPPIN DIS SHIT HONEST VOTES ONLY
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03-21-05, 03:18 PM
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Kamikazee: liking your verse, had nice creative punches and had your flow on lock as well. Structure's good and you had a good balance with your vocab, not too complex and not too basic either. Used self-glorification here and there but not too often though. Tried some personals but they didn't always work out too well, like when you tried to play off his name...nah, wasn't feeling that line. My favo lines are last 2 'cause I felt they landed quite hard and had personal touch to it. FlOw InTeLLiGeNt: hehe, nice verse as well. Had even more creativity in my opinion, some dope ass wordplay and I was definately feeling your flow. Had a line of self-glorification as well but I guess everyone uses it as a filler here and there, it didn't affect the content of your verse though. Your vocab was impeccable as well as your structure. Had some good personals in there, like the opener for instance. Okay, this is a close battle in my opinion but in the end, my vote goes to FlOw InTeLLiGeNt for having dope wordplay and bit more creativity than Kamikazee but I enjoyed reading this battle! Nice going guys! DQ
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