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Old 03-19-05, 07:37 AM   #1
Dirty Nigga
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Text Record: 33-18
Naw Itz Nothin'..(Freestyle)

IP: 21ED 60C1

Come take a look In the mind of Buck
sit back, get in the life of a nigga who dont give a Fuck
keep the heat tucked, pants Sag, throwback n Hat..
Freshest kicks, blessed ta Spit, sprayin like Rat-a-tat-Tat
Clean as a Laundry Mat, Runnin laps on Tracks
Standin out like Platinum Plaques, Kids on the Come Up
Lyrical math, y'all niggas cant Sum Up, Grab ya Calculator..
Time out too Announce-some-haters...
Marv talkin his 'Queens' niggas gon 'Break-my-Face'..
Download 'Fruity' loops with Elton John...
...............still couldnt 'Make-The-Base'[Bass]
i'm in 1st-Place, try takin my Spot...ya just might get Shot (ha haa)
New york nigga dont War, he gon be like Invektive an Duck Round 2..
even my Momz could knock this pussy out, Head south-Bound-Due..
tre-pound Comes Thru, its gon' be Bloody Murder..
my Revenge... Gaggin this whitegirl so nobody Heard-Ya
Screamin, cryin, prayin for ya Poppa...
i bang more heads than a mosh pit full of Punk-Rockers..
tired of weak wanksta talkin bout reppin they Set...
i aint even concerned bout RV, On the block i'ma Vet
the General movin soldier on ''Attenchuuun''..
this i should prolly Not Mention........
but i gotta find a enemy ta release my Anger....
fuckin crack-head, i'm movin units like 'rock'...so watch me Slang-Ya
fo-real, gang-bang-ya, so ya lies make ya own Fate..
heart Pulsates, buck is comin thru heavier than Obese Weight..
bitches made a 'Syndicate' but they cant even Rhymeeeeee...
i'm all up in-a-slut' like lyrical Jailbait is a CRYHME...
Its about that time, Lock-n-Load, get into attack Mode...
ya ride or get Rode..bitch you aint no Villain..
i aint no murderer, but if merkin is Killin...
i pleade guilty ta all Charges..........
supers a big dildo, he wanna talk n try an come 'hard?'..
..........................stick him in a penis Enlarger...
u come hard, buck come harder......
just go 'head n keep Duckin, niggas naw, ITS NOTHIN...
Lil homo best be scared when buck starts BUSSIN


.........Quick freestyle
y'all know who you are hatin on me, its that time ya step up cause ya aint gon let buck do u like this on a quick 7 MINUTE FREESTYLE

I'm out, fuck y'all niggas
Peeeeace
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Old 03-19-05, 11:20 AM   #2
FlowIntelligent.
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Text Record: 55-26
IP: 28AD 5545

that was seriously wack lol, dont ever freestyle again in your life stick to taking your time to write, because u had no hard punches, no good wordplay a couple good multies, structure was fucked rhyme scheme was fucked and gangsta rap went out with NWA.

overall: 5/10
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