i need help with 2 things

1) i got a mic so how do i do these audio battles??

2) i need someone to help me around here, like a vet or someone good to point out all the weak things in my verse and what i should or can do to help improve my skills, no i dont need a ghost writter i need pointers and maybe a crew will help me out 2 u know what im saying

u know anyone good enoug to help?
or
is there a crew that can help me elevate?

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no-one??????????

i guess not then huh??

for starters, pump your brakes. No need to up the same post 4x in 45 mins. As for how to record and so on, click the link in my sig that reads "Audio 101".

As for crit (criticizm) and feed (feedback), drop some feedback on other people's rhmyes first (and not omse ol "dIs WuZ GuD" type shit. Drop something with some sort of thought and detail to it. THEN post yours. Hit the prior people who's tracks you fed on to leave you feed on your track and that hould get you started. Hit me with a PM and I'll check your track and give you honest feed. This should get you rolling. Any other questions?

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^^ u seem to be on a cool leve no hate no agression no cockyness,

but why u is 0-1 in text and 2-0 in audio??

i need to take lession on audio i mean not hand by hand lesson just how to start it up and what beat i should use for battles

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...977#post2027977

^^ thats my open mic link

i have another one but i cant find it now but it should be in open mic anyways

plus i have a few links for battles u can hit them up,
and i just finish battling heroic like 5 min ago u can vote on that honestly good luck i will return the favor wordness

Funny (and long) story abot the text record but I came here and fell victim to the same trap that a lot of people here warned me about - CALI's dickrider circle. Haven't seen one single vet on this board that thoguht he took it, but that's another story entirely. I'm 2-0 in audio because "Tha Q" no-showed once (which isn't technically a "win" by my standards since no battle took place) and I KOed him for the second one. If CALI showed up to all the battles that he ran from, I'd have been 7-0 although no lyrics would have been exchanged. Liek I siad a few days after I got here - "the voting and the system here is so fucked up, I will never count any wins/ties/losses on this site toward my overall record" and I still mean that.

As for your open mics and so on, if they're audio, I'll give em a listen, but most text I don't read to be honest. Just dosen't translate the same and a lot of what's great in text would be complete shit in audio.

As for your link to your audio, once you give people woh have their tracks up some feedback, I'll be more than happy to give you some feedback. Guess I'll see you in the audio lounge. 1

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if you need help get at me...i can help in text and audio....

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^^ yes plez thanks alot,

i need help in text can u peep some of my battles and tell me what im i doing wrong?
what was weak what was good and what i should use more next time like more punches less multis
more multis less complex-words easyer to follow punches?

i just need a few pointers i dont need for u to tell me what to write or how to flow, just what i should of done and shouldnt do