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| the kid 523 |
  
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5 | 100.00% |
| wanadienigga |
  
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03-22-05, 02:28 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C024 E429
Voted For: the kid 523
the kid- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ wan - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ the kid make sure 2 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182879 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-23-05, 05:07 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin this shit for the freakin win already........
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03-23-05, 06:25 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin for the fuckin win already lol
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03-26-05, 10:49 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin for the win .
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03-27-05, 07:00 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin this shit for the win
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03-27-05, 07:14 PM
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#21
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L.E
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IP: 9C21 BEB0
Voted For: the kid 523
A'ight...I'ma keep this simple... The Kid...you're few bars were a'ight...opener...meh...middle...blah...played...a nd your closer, you sorta dissed yourself....overall, okay flow, decent structure...elevation is good for everybody. Your problem is that you need to get more creative...work on that. Wanadieannigga...You arent punching the kid directly. You are rapping about kids who clam they can rap...not THE kid...decent structure, flow was fucked because your structure was messed to shit...you also need to get more creative, and dont start new lines that continue from the last. This battle was wacka s fuck...but The kid takes it for at least punching Wanadien directly. |
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