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03-23-05, 10:10 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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Dreams...
IP: 963B DD50
Looking In This Mirror, Like Broken Glass, All I See is a Shattered Dream.. My Very Own World Is crumbling in my own hands or so it may seem.. Rubbing My Fingers, Against The Sharp Edges, Reminds me of Regrets.. Looking In This Mirror, All i see is a shattered Dream.. Staring Blankly At My Reflection, And Seeing No Soul.... Its As If I My Tears have dried, and my hearts made of coal... Deep Down, Im feeling That my Days are Out-Numbered.. As I stare blankly at my reflection and see no Soul... As The Hands Of Time Gain On Me, My Time Seems To Fade... And i can no longer InVision The Dreams That I Made.... With That Being Said... I Believe Its Time For Me To Go.. As The Hands Of Time Gain On Me, My Times Seems To Fade... Just Getting Back in The Swing Of Things...
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03-23-05, 10:12 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
im feelin it dawg its deep
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03-23-05, 10:13 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
keep it up............holla at cha
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03-24-05, 02:36 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
this piece sucked one giant ass.....like in fat bitches porno.....whoa..........haha, j/m....check TE for my respone wet dreams (<----your new nick)
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03-24-05, 04:47 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
^^lol, your vocabulary is prominent here, for a short piece,you say a lot in this poem, nice job, i was feeling this..keep dropping.1
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03-25-05, 12:15 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: C37E 3A03
yah i wrote this in like 5 minutes.. just getting some off that poetry rust off.. upping..
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