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Old 03-25-05, 07:29 AM   #1
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take a look.

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I cant comfort you
like the safety blanket you've grown accustomed tox It just seems like everytime I attempt to pry your pad-locked eyes open I end up on my knees with my hands reaching for the skyxxxxxxxpaying lifes fees, always asking why?We get along so much better when we agree with eachother,
instead we kill one another arguing over the weather.
Having to be right about everythingxxxxxx
like which weighs morexxxxx a rock or a featherx
You of all people should know thisxxxx
theres a logical explanation behind everything that existsx
I know you know it allx
So you can answer me this: Are you the way you are because ignorance is blissxxxIs it really as you've explained itxxThat part of your brain is amissx
And why does my love for you make me want to slit my wrists?
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Old 03-25-05, 09:34 PM   #2
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dopeness.....this poem = solid piece.........keep up
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Old 03-26-05, 02:08 PM   #3
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This was a good poem. I thought it was better than your first piece as well. Good looks man, keep it up.
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Old 03-27-05, 12:29 AM   #4
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Word NIce Piece

aye mayne why Are you still A free Agent ?

Come By Military Mindz

And Make sure you Say That I Suggested you there

And Give them The link to This ----- DOPE
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Old 04-12-05, 04:29 AM   #5
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Very nice drop homie.

Keep dropping more, I like reading them...
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Old 04-13-05, 01:10 PM   #6
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see its poems like this that put a smile on my face, you are a very talented writer...thats why you got my vote for poet of the month,for your consistently well written,well thought out pieces..keep it up..1
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