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Old 03-29-05, 03:45 AM   #1
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wait for me at least for tonight . if not tomorrow . its not the same
because in the simplest way i guess i could mumble your name
its not easy i can tell its written all over your eyes
this is easy. this has to come easy. i'll sit here
guitar in my hand as i get things rearranged and now i
now i wait for you . we . we could have
but i wouldnt i'll give you the benefit of the doubt

let me write this down . rewrite it all
and hit rewind. make sure its right for me but ever so perfect for you
this first touch could sway the course of events
as we breath for the first time
. exhale .
make sure nothing is ever missed and its coming back to me now
free to my hand and even softer when it comes from my mouth
let me have a chance and give you everything you ever said you wanted
lets get this is the right . lets bring this back from the dark back to light
i'll move my lips and give you a chance to respond
better yet i'll wait for your reaction.

as we step into the light . this could be our opportunity
our last chance to go. our last chance to get this in order
but before . a milestone.
first we need to have enough in place to remember .
we'll take this for what it is
and maybe when we can look back on this we can understand
why some things were never ever spoken of.

your spoken word was effortless and simple .
this is more than what i had thrown together
this was more than your favorite song
this was something a little more personal
this was me coming to the realization that you were always in my shadow
before i gave you a chance to glow and grow

i'll let you know it was never meant to be this complex
and you loved it when i kept it simple. it was real enough
it was more than just a poetic justice. it wasn't us giving up
for more or less it was the justification of a moral support
consequences that we should have recognized from the start
this could be now
this could be now more than what we ever wanted
and you could feel this to the depths of your soul
as for me i'll never give into the demons of sleep
for now i'll write the angels i never believed in
letters of apologies for each time i broke their wings


i'm still nothing with out this .finding something to bring
this was a mirror that had a reflection of pure emotion
except the lights shine through forget the notion
because with out this there would be no end





i wrote this off the top of my head ..booooored hate it if you must. simple enough for me because i can't trust anyone thus my philosophy is let live die
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Old 03-30-05, 01:20 AM   #2
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wow, this is a great poem, pretty deep, i enjoyed reading it..your vocabulary is strong, which makes this a joy to read, keep it up..1
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Old 04-01-05, 12:22 AM   #3
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uppity uppp....
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Old 04-03-05, 04:16 PM   #4
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I read it a couple of times to fully grasp the content, to really understand what you were saying here. The way you worded everything, the deeper meanings in such simple sentences were crazy! You made me think about a lot of things throughout this poem, how you portrayed the feelings and thoughts...shit was amazing!

Emotion was dope, the imagery was cool, got me thinking about life, love and all that shit. If a poem or a song gets me thinking, then it must be good! Enjoyed reading this because I like your writing style, it's easy to read and at same time, it's not. Vocab is good, not too basic but not too complex either.

Dopeness!

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Old 06-11-05, 01:11 AM   #5
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thanks uppin....
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