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Old 04-03-05, 07:43 PM   #16
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Pretty good shit, nice drop, cept I thought you left the site for good? oh well, the comeback has begun then I guess, lol, like how you got on C.A.L.I, good shit, nice verse, liked this line the most:

Quick and sly in my battles, I’m rising to the top without yall
Shit, I’ll dodge yah shots like a kid who’s a virgin to alcohol

overall good drop, nice way to comeback... 7.5/10

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Old 04-03-05, 07:45 PM   #17
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I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace
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Old 04-04-05, 03:10 PM   #18
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Bump. This. Up. There.
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Old 04-04-05, 03:37 PM   #19
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definately had some good lines in there...killed it wit metas and wordplay...and personals....I actually read it all...it kept me interested...
dont know you...but ur consistent.......................................s o far

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Old 04-04-05, 06:27 PM   #20
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You don't know me? =\ just look up L.I.
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Old 04-04-05, 08:46 PM   #21
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lol L.I. just got back and already rippin on cali
nice shit man gettin them personals in there
now i love wordplay and i saw alot in here nice shit
consistant verse throughout when i saw the title i though
it was going to be a topical open mic but then i was like ahhh
lol nice shit man, glad your back
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Old 04-05-05, 02:05 AM   #22
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Damn L.I welcome back , dope peice
I was really feeling it alot..
Your structure was good ..
You had lots of feeling , and nice emotions in ya drop
You really took time to make this good , and it show'd
Overall this was a dope peice... and glad to have you back
and hope to see another OM' from you later on
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Old 04-05-05, 07:50 PM   #23
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I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace


Best hit one up ....
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Old 04-06-05, 05:57 PM   #24
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Upping..................
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Old 04-06-05, 07:24 PM   #25
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i like ur writing style...but, with lines this extended, u need more internal multies to hold my interest...personally


ne way...good flow...strong word choice


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Old 04-08-05, 06:33 PM   #26
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Word....upping.......................
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Old 04-08-05, 07:02 PM   #27
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this was nice L.I, creative n put together well, i agree with Q
it would help ya flow out if ya had more inners in there,but
hey...i think everyone knows you top shelf when talents mentioned on rv....
stay up man...this shit was a real good read...n i liked the personals
funny shit all around....appreciate it if ya RTF.....PZ
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 04-08-05, 07:25 PM   #28
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Damn i ain't got nothin to say but I.L. is at it again keep it up playa
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Old 04-09-05, 01:04 AM   #29
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word..........................upping
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Old 04-09-05, 03:22 AM   #30
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pretty decent piece...
...flow was kinda good here
some was a lil too long tho...
...had some punches in there
that was aight, but overall decent...
...drop though...7/10
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