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Old 04-25-05, 02:57 PM   #1
Ice Pick
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Frozen Wind

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from a mountain
hear the wind
calling me
after all ive sinned
but it's so cold up there
there in the sky
so dark and lonely
in the night sky
with the moon
and stars above
blanket me
with frozen love
to change and yet not
thats the way it seems
to fallow from
lakes to streams
so different and yet
so the same
to freeze and not burn
why dam the flame?
blinded by darkness
is not better
blinded by light
and bound by every letter
so i climbed up high
was cut on rocks
but thats the cost
to join his flocks
if sheep are protected
only for slaughter
to kill your own
son and daughter
then ide rather stay alone
not get killed
by those i love
by those i'm filled
becuase i jumped off
from that high place
dashed on rocks
smashed my face
all for you
and all for light
for that lie we killed
and we still fight
so many have died
and so many have sinned
all in the name of god
all in the name of frozen wind
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Old 04-26-05, 03:09 PM   #2
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this was different. it was aiight had to read it over a couple of times but i enjoyed it. not sure why u structured it the way u did but its all good. still a nice read. keep up the good work
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