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Old 04-26-05, 10:06 PM   #1
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Life of an Outlaw - directed at TONY GREEN- mustread

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( got this concept from a song on Tha Don Kilumanati 7 Day Theory cd..)

ya'll done fucked up now

tony green? tony mothafuckin green? tha same disloyal bitch ass tony green that ran outta E.F.?? i warned you mothafuckas not to say my name didn't i? bitches start me...bitches perish. lets go fuckin coward

these niggas fear me in tha physical
got 6 shot's tony they'll fuckin finish you
diminish you leave ya rap career a memory
this cat thinkin he hot...ha...u fuckin kiddin me
i'll turn a livin legend into a dead fable
turn tha tables on u bitch ass cowards
just try me nigga i'm willin and able
to slay you mothafuckin faggot
(u just don't understand mayne)
i'll get rid of u like a fuckin bad habbit
cash, grab it stash it then lock and load
ready to go guns cock and explode
leave tony green wit a hole in his throat
and watch him choke

in tha life we live as thugs
everybody's fuckin wit us
so cant you see?
it's hard to be a man
ridin wit my guns in hand

i'm in a awkward position yet i'm on a mission
to be an evil tactitian, force bitches to submission
i got this nigga tony green twitchin
...wishin he could come close to my composition
this no talent fucka call me out and he'll end up missin
thought i was heated before? well this diss is ignition
die slow mothafucka wit ya eyes closed
be real tony ya crew's a mothafuckin side show
mad knight i'mma be real wit u nigga u gay
fuck around and i'll stomp u on tha streets of UK
while i'm on u yo i'll school u bitch welcome 2 class
u tha only fool on RV rhymin Nas wit ass (dawg)
u nowhere near a livin legend wut tha fuck is u on
u and tha Q is tied for tha RV version of Elton John
fuck u niggas i'm finished

see nigga u shouldda just left it alone but naaaw u had 2 call me out and i'm just doin wut i do.....respondin with LYRICAL shit unlike u and ya crew..... i aint gotta diss u mayne i do songs..i aint got no beef but if u come at me I WILL .....i repeat I WILL come at u. no doubt.....now sit on dat shit 4 a minute and chill out.....solo....

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Old 04-27-05, 09:28 AM   #3
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whump.....whump.....whump Fate you a Lil nigga you not on my level I got elevation heads for niggaz like you watch this bitch!
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Old 04-27-05, 08:43 PM   #4
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^^ come wit it...i'm ready 4 wuteva bitch
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Naw you aint ready cause a nigga on our elevation roster bout tp murder you!
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Old 04-27-05, 09:00 PM   #6
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that nigga aint u tho trust if he fuck wit me he WILL regret it....matta fact make it that nigga daubs if u that bold
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Old 04-27-05, 09:04 PM   #7
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Dont beef in this forum please... or you will be banned
About the peice.. This was an okay , drop
Ive seen alot better from you fate...
You had some okay personals , some okay punchlines..
Structure was okay, ...Alittle off , next time try to match up
your bars... You had some fillers in your drop , but it was an okay drop
overall keep it up elevate on wordplay, and stronger punchlines
thankz for the link
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Old 04-27-05, 09:25 PM   #8
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^^thanx 4 feed dawg....uppin
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yeh man strait diss......thought some lines were whitty......some seemed forced and saw some fillers.....but you def pwned Tony in this diss........good job homie.......keep reppin hard famlay
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