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Check in by: 05-02-05 at 07:42 PM

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Unrestricted has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 07:43 PM.

come on dog, you send a private message talkin shit
when u know you aint "rippin" shit but ur mother pussy bitch
you couldnt spit hot shit if u swallowed dog shit
you couldnt "get" pussy if you had a clit
have this nigga pleading like his mother to "stop it"
leave his insides inflamed and burning like a hot pocket
my rhymes stay fresh like they were locked away in ziploc
when u see naked dudes, thats the only time for u shit "pops"

DA RIPPA has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 07:43 AM.

yo imma murder this bitch


yo yo

* i pull out my nine and give your head a new peephole*
*dismolish your boby and have people looking for you like that fish from finding nemo*

*but you won't be found cause you space has ben RESTRICTED*
*retarded ass, i'll send you to a school for the gifted*

*have your ass lifted..... but not to heaven*
*but from the shells of my k from my 187*

*beat ya ass down, let one of my nigga's get a turn*
* cover you in gasoline, like usher, i'll let your ass burn*

*who will win between me and this stupuid ass nigga*
*with his ass looking like somthing out of micheal jackson thrilla*

*restrict you beating me, are you full of shit*
* you got a better chance trying to find your dick*

*i'm a king in this bitch you can call me boss*
*and no you aint being punk you realy just lost*

duece up bitch kick rocks
*yo unrestricted you just been restrict*
* now get tha hell on so i can finish fucking your bitch*

Voted For: DA RIPPA

mettas= da rippa
punches=da rippa
creativity= da rippa
wordplay=da rippa
enjoyment= da rippa

your right man u murdered him lol, your not an elevated mcee or nothing but he is just perfetic. Battling kids like him is just a waste of time. Its lookis like the first verse his ever typed in his like coz it was that bad. anyways just improve on ya structure, punches n concepts da rippa n you'll be there ite. peace, rtf on my battle wit lil roach

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

voted for Da rippa

Rippa got this due to harder punches

rippa
punches- hard hittin, creative, wel worded
personals- lil basic but descent
multies- didnt see any
flow- nice flow, very eay to keep with
structure- descent strucutre easy to read

Un
Punches- Lil basic, but they were ight get a lil harder
personals- nuttin to great but descent
flow- good flow real nice n easy to stay wit
multies- didnt see any
strucutre good strucutre easy to read n stay wit

The opunches went to Rappa in thas why i voted for him i like his punches n how he worded them n how they hit hard

both elevate on some hard personals

good battle fams


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Voted For: DA RIPPA

befor i vote can ya plez return the favor of voting in my battle with christyle its been open with only 1 vote we need a couple more thanks...

LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189120

now let me vote....


come on dog, you send a private message talkin shit
when u know you aint "rippin" shit but ur mother pussy bitch
you couldnt spit hot shit if u swallowed dog shit
you couldnt "get" pussy if you had a clit
have this nigga pleading like his mother to "stop it"
leave his insides inflamed and burning like a hot pocket
my rhymes stay fresh like they were locked away in ziploc
when u see naked dudes, thats the only time for u shit "pops"

this was decent a couple direct diss a punch in there but wasnt to complex just straight foward diss look like a verse outta anger just chill relax and get at him get a little creative use a little multis those help out but still a good verse...

6/10


yo imma murder this bitch


yo yo

* i pull out my nine and give your head a new peephole*
*dismolish your boby and have people looking for you like that fish from finding nemo*

*but you won't be found cause you space has ben RESTRICTED*
*retarded ass, i'll send you to a school for the gifted*

*have your ass lifted..... but not to heaven*
*but from the shells of my k from my 187*

*beat ya ass down, let one of my nigga's get a turn*
* cover you in gasoline, like usher, i'll let your ass burn*

*who will win between me and this stupuid ass nigga*
*with his ass looking like somthing out of micheal jackson thrilla*

*restrict you beating me, are you full of shit*
* you got a better chance trying to find your dick*

*i'm a king in this bitch you can call me boss*
*and no you aint being punk you realy just lost*

duece up bitch kick rocks
*yo unrestricted you just been restrict*
* now get tha hell on so i can finish fucking your bitch*


this was alot better verse then the one i just saw from u da rippa, u had a proper flow in this verse u had a couple of decent punches in this verse *u only had 1 last time* u was more focus more direct and more complex in this verse look like someone took they time to prefect it and it turn out preety good nice verse but keep elevateing ya complex skill and punches u will get better.... 7.5/10

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last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0

whos next!!

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