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Old 05-05-05, 10:58 AM   #1
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Gettin Attention...showcasin my skills

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go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga
go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga

im on da level of "concietedness" dat "words dont make sense"
fools try to "boggle" my "game" but im "cold" so my flow is "sick"
raps "move too quick" cuz of this "coffee" shit dat i sit and sip
sum say im "nice" and hope on dick like "i can help em and shit"
far from a bitch but tha lies will cease and tha truth shall speak
deletin hatin speech from tha "block" so i put "hits in da streets"
slim folk is weak tryin to test a "G" like im not "original" wit mines
u wanna "de-thrown a king" in durin dis money gettin lifetime?
im sorry, but u cant do it nigga, so u back to "plannin and sketchin"
and im writtin bout stressin teachin lessons wit more than wessons
im out here flexin on hoes but they be shitty faced, actin naive
so i move on to they momma dats positioned already on knees
needin time to breathe so i step out wit ease and light a square up
u dont want me to "nut" up in dis bitch, mess round and "jack" up
i stay on my grind all tha time, man i hustle like twenty-four-seven
and im done wit verse one, "showcasin skillz", like "tryouts for heven"

go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga
go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga

im on da level of "concietedness" dat "words dont make sense"
fools try to "boggle" my "game" but im "cold" so my flow is "sick"
high noon type of shit, a nigga betta stay clean and rich
dont get in trouble ova stupid shit, u do and ya skull split
wide open like my eyes be, how me?, shit homie im free!
what tha fuck u expect to see, my fat ass smokin trees?
naw folk dat aint me, i just drink, so lets pop a bottle
get dis boucin, curcuit breakin, niggaz hatin cuz we wit models
and they wont hold ya hand (naw), but they'll understand (yup)
dat dis shit right here is from a fuckin grown ass man (yeah)
im mean a grown ass teen, i know yall will understand
dat i "spit fiya" like "dylan was claimin while on makin tha band"
i got tha juice in hand, girlfriend got cock in her hands
they sayin dat im tha man, "lead singer of my muthafuckin band"
now dat wasnt showcasin shit, but i wanted to jus say sum shit
had to spit, real real quick, now u know who i is BITCH!

go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga
go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga
go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga
go Doe Bagz!...get they attention playa
show sum skill, dont be scared, do sum shit nigga

*come holla at me when u got sum doe...nigga*
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Old 05-05-05, 11:08 AM   #2
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Old 05-05-05, 11:15 AM   #3
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pretty decent rhymes, Doe...
you on some fabolous shit with the rhymes u be sayin, the flow was good, few decent lines here n there, a few good punches, some gunplay too, if u use it right, thats a good thing in my opinnon too....this is some dope shit, lemme get on a re-re-remiiiiiiix of this shit, man!
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Old 05-05-05, 11:18 AM   #4
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iight...we can remix it tonite...uppin
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Old 05-06-05, 08:37 PM   #5
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uppin dis shit...damn
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Old 05-06-05, 08:52 PM   #6
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This was a pretty nice peice...
Flow was good ,...structure was also good...
You had some nice punchlines ...
Some were just plain fillers ...
You had some nice wordplay , and use of vocab...
You need to chill on using''' when you dont need em
you point out every little punch you got
and it really doesnt need it ... overalll it was a decent drop
could have been alot better... if it had more direct and hotter
punchlines,and less fillers... keep it up and drop a link or this will be closed
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Old 05-06-05, 08:53 PM   #7
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i dropped a link bone...and thanx for tha feed mayne...uppin
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Old 05-06-05, 08:56 PM   #8
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yo DB we shulda got u in OG lol...droppin shit like this lol...shits tough....8.5/10...flow and structure were top notch..wordplay was hot but u could tell there were fillers lol...holla
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Old 05-06-05, 09:20 PM   #9
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thanx fam...and i rollz wit tha Tiks...thanx for tha offer tho homie...upps
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Old 05-06-05, 09:22 PM   #10
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this was a pretty decent drop dog, i can see u gettin better wit every joint u do. ya punches still need some work tho, and u should try n work to make some good multies. but ya flow has gotten much better and these verses were good. so keep doin ya thing and droppin ya shit, nah mean.
DROP an honest vote on my battle wit STANZA....1.....
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Old 05-06-05, 09:29 PM   #11
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can he...cuzi mean TECHNICALLY he's not in EF...but he was in it lol...wutever ote onmine too...dont got the link thogh lol...uppin for DB
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Old 05-06-05, 09:38 PM   #12
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stanza in tha Tiks too...cant vote for ya City...
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Old 05-09-05, 06:20 PM   #13
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umm...i would like to uhh..upp
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Old 05-19-05, 06:30 PM   #14
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real talk im uppin
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Old 05-20-05, 11:56 AM   #15
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Pretty Nice Drop DOE!Could've Spit alot Better!Pretty Decent but i Really Did Like It!Structure Was Nice!Flow Was Right On Point!Had Some Vocab n Wordplay!But U Know U Can Drop Somethin Better Than Dat Famz!But My Opininion
8/10
Keep Ya HEad up N keep droppin Them Sik Azz Flowz!
(Peep My OM out n Leave FB)Om>Clippin Dem Boys From Da Hood!

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