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05-09-05, 07:27 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Surviving the Game
IP: ED88 2C9A
You'll get shot from the six 4-5 semi-semis
You ain't gonna be benching no weight, when your blood's drippin steady Fuck it man my life is full of promises, left and broken Nothin means shit if every interview leaves you chokin Thinkin of ways to keep a nigga's job from foldin Like setting up grinds on tha blocks, avenues and streets while token... Gotta be easy, gotta be careful - If your flippin nicks tha wrong way - Your hustling game will end up in the zero... Cuz some niggas juss like to hate, how I know Sayin they shit, if opinions really did matter, I'd be hooked to Jay Leno... Or who about Maury Povich, or the Windred show? Fuck no! I ain't got no luv for no game posers, cussin' loose end hoes...
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05-09-05, 07:49 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: ED88 2C9A
Yo i want to know how im doin critisize this
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05-09-05, 08:40 PM
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IP: 99A1 48F7
I think U need tah work on ur structure an how u paint ur picture with words
be more vivid an try ta have a lil more multi's cuz really sum of ur bars didnt rhyme but If ur life is like that then be more deeper!!
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