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AckRite 5 100.00%
Yungg Blay 0 0%
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Old 05-10-05, 05:28 PM   #16
p4ntzistheish
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Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS Review-

AckRite

Blayy Dyin From Punches, Lift Arm...No Sign Of Ya Pulse Kid
Only Time RV Dont Sleep On Ya Posts...We Unda Hypnosis!

This is the worst opener I've seen from you...butits good lol

Audios? Last Time You 'Touched Tracs'...It Was On Ya Head
New To Text? But He 'Eat Pencils' Jus To 'Swallow Da Lead'!

Decent....

Blayy Dont Wanna See Round 2.....And Dis Battles My Proof
Im DEAD SERIOUS, Ur More 'Fit 4 A Loss" Than Funeral Suits!

Haha

I AM Hip-Hop....Got This Homo's Road to Victory GridLocked
Asthmatic Wordplay, Bringin Dis MOTORMOUTH to a Pit-Stop!

Pretty good

We Know I Own You In Text...You Vulnerable A Virgin Newbie
& I Got Blayy "Down 4 Tha COUNT"......Like Dracula Groupies!

One of the best closere I've seen...ever

Yungg Blay

Yeah... listen up "AckRite" betta get your "facks right"
Cuz I got a punch like Ali and this is just my first "fight"

Played...

I ain't even gon lie tho, I'm feelin ya sig and Cass is right
He's a hustla, but you're not so stop actin like ya shit is tight

Worded weird but decent

Compare us to airlines, im "fly" like first class im ridin "top flight"
Your shit about to crash homie, this bout to be your "burial site

Meh...

Aiight, enough with that one rhyme this off the head its about time
Somebody hit the site with a real battle, murderin cats consistently like "organized crime"

Nice

Oh shit, i've already written 8 lines? That means minus this one got one more to make this battle mine
Im fixin to put you to sleep right here kid like this your fuckin "nursery rhyme"

TERRIBLE structure...decent close

Overall: AckRite took tthis...Baly had a decent verse but little personals...AckRite didnt have too many but what he had was INSANE lol...nice battle by both..rtf on my sig pieces...
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Old 05-11-05, 05:02 PM   #17
AckRite
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
 
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Jeah Uppin Dis Battle Too...............Why Dont Ppl Like To Vote?? Imma Stop Battlin Lol
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Old 05-12-05, 07:04 PM   #18
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
 
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Aeyo Lets Get Some More Votes On Dis Shit..................NO Hate Votes Either
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Old 05-13-05, 07:09 AM   #19
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good shit Ackrite, u get this win too lol...

Im DEAD SERIOUS, Ur More 'Fit 4 A Loss" Than Funeral Suits!
^^
Haha, good shit

Uppin for fam..
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Old 05-13-05, 10:07 AM   #20
AutoMatik
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Voted For: AckRite

Blayy Dyin From Punches, Lift Arm...No Sign Of Ya Pulse Kid
Only Time RV Dont Sleep On Ya Posts...We Unda Hypnosis!
^ummmm no...bad opener..
Audios? Last Time You 'Touched Tracs'...It Was On Ya Head
New To Text? But He 'Eat Pencils' Jus To 'Swallow Da Lead'!
^ok....this was forced like a bitch....
Blayy Dont Wanna See Round 2.....And Dis Battles My Proof
Im DEAD SERIOUS, Ur More 'Fit 4 A Loss" Than Funeral Suits!
^decent...
I AM Hip-Hop....Got This Homo's Road to Victory GridLocked
Asthmatic Wordplay, Bringin Dis MOTORMOUTH to a Pit-Stop!
^basic...
We Know I Own You In Text...You Vulnerable A Virgin Newbie
& I Got Blayy "Down 4 Tha COUNT"......Like Dracula Groupies!
^self glore..and basic closer...

^elevate..

overall:8.5/10
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Yeah... listen up "AckRite" betta get your "facks right"
Cuz I got a punch like Ali and this is just my first "fight"
^just stop....
I ain't even gon lie tho, I'm feelin ya sig and Cass is right
He's a hustla, but you're not so stop actin like ya shit is tight
^basic....
Compare us to airlines, im "fly" like first class im ridin "top flight"
Your shit about to crash homie, this bout to be your "burial site"
^no....
Aiight, enough with that one rhyme this off the head its about time
Somebody hit the site with a real battle, murderin cats consistently like "organized crime"
^no....
Oh shit, i've already written 8 lines? That means minus this one got one more to make this battle mine
Im fixin to put you to sleep right here kid like this your fuckin "nursery rhyme"
^horrible closer..

^elevate..

overall:4.7/10..

basic battle nothin big or serious...~1~
 
Old 05-13-05, 12:20 PM   #21
L. Veracity
You Cant Handle The Truth
 
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Voted For: AckRite

Yungg Blay's verse was okay but that Cassidy reference you made, you failed at making it a punchline so that was a lost cause, and your bars were real simple, this whole thing was all filler to me...your closer was pretty horrible...

AckRite's verse was on opint, he had some kickin' punches in his verse and undenyably wins this easily...closer wouldn't been better placed elsewhere but it was way better than Blay's...best line was --i'm dead serious, you're more "fit to lose" than funeral suits--

VOTE: AckRite
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Old 05-14-05, 12:35 AM   #22
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Voted For: AckRite

LOLL, this nigga said
We Know I Own You In Text...You Vulnerable A Virgin Newbie
& I Got Blayy "Down 4 Tha COUNT"......Like Dracula Groupies!
Dang homie, nigga is serious. Yo my vote is for Ackrite on account of his overall verse. The rest of it was alright but the closure made a nigga get up and laugh so he gets my vote.
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