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Old 05-10-05, 06:18 PM   #1
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Thumbs up "Reality" [Collab]

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Yo here is a collab i dropped wit some kid named jack daniels.
this is an alright peice in my eyes.
1st verse. ..TexT.a.WrecK..
2nd verse. Jack Daniels
read, leave some feedback and enjoy

What Is Reality? Reality Is Street Life & Brutality...
Givin Kids Fatalities For Wearin A Color, Wearin Those Colors Are Just Thier Moralities...
16 & Younger.. With Good Personalities, And Young Girls Whos Experienced Sexual Immoralities...
Im From Tha Hood... Cali, Thats Also My Mentality, But Its Old For Me, Thats Why Im Preachin...
This Is What We Call Reality...
People On Pcp, Like They Have Immortality, This Is Just N9ne's Technicality...
Im From The Street Life, I Was Once A Menace To Society, Askin Peeps 'Whats Sobriety?'
Sobriety Is Pain & Anxiety, Look At All These Multies If You Bit You Have A Good Variety...
Im Spontaneus, When Ya Hear Tha Glock Go Off On Tha Block...Your Homies Shot...
Time For Retaliation, For Making You See Ya Boy Outlined In White Chalk...
Your In Tha Car With A Mac On Ya Lap, Stompin On Tha Acceleration...
Drive By Tha Fools, Shoot Cuz This Is Your Domination, To Survive These Steets You Must Have Determination...
Classical Tactic's Formulate'd By Versatile Classic's Alcove'd By Complex Pilosophy's Created By Tha Original N9ne Clips Context...
interjecte'd wit thought's of wisdom and tha elusive thought's of pure text...
Still Writing Hard, I Look In Tha Mirror What Do I See? Tha Shit Reflects A Killin' Spree...
Like Malcom X, What Can You Expect From Tha Projects? Here Were All Suspects, We all Have Tech Like Objects...
Much Respekt With Intellect, Rhymes Neglect, Text Check With Perfection, Enemy Detection...
Smoke Em, & Wreck Em, Choke Em, & Check Em, Provoke Em , & Bless Em...
What Is Reality Let Me Kno JD...
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Jack Daniels Verse...
Complexity from overseas as breezes put me to my knees as i see anirexity
Im too intelligent so dont mess with me from cocaine to major and razor exticy
Infared's as lazers testing me and watching every last move and the way cash do
Liberate our minds and dispopulate the nations foundation and cops harrass you
Your an invisibile being and these bitch ass white hypocrypts walk pass you
Its trash too, the way they go onto the news and brutally bash you
Sympathetic beings without annilects to reflect the blind without seeing
But maybe they will look through me to recheck this sex of mind freeing
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Old 05-10-05, 06:29 PM   #2
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Wasnt feelin it man...Lines were stretched as hell which fucked up the flow...

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Old 05-10-05, 06:35 PM   #3
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Wasnt feelin it man...Lines were stretched as hell which fucked up the flow...

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wut he said....fix yur structure first and foremost...that'll automatically fix any flow probs...u used multis so wit better structure and u got potenial...return the favor on ALL in my sig on NEVER expect any feed from me again
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Old 05-10-05, 11:02 PM   #4
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closed pm me alink if you wish to have this re-opened
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