Voted For: Topical

Mute- flow was aiight.....nothing special, vocab was basic, punches didnt hit hard at all....basically your verse was a bunch of filler. I can tell you are just starting out at this, so just read some of the good peoples battles and elevate.

Topical- flow was pretty good, vocab wasnt bad, punches were aiight...they were pretty played but they were way better than the other guys. It seemed like you didnt really try for this one, i know you can drop harder than that.

v/ Topical

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Voted For: Topical

votin for Topical

Topical got this dfue to harder punches and personals

Topical
ya punches were hard hittin, creative n well worded
ya personals wernt as strong but creative and got the point across
ya flow was good ya had a very nice beat goin on that matched ya strucutre
ya strucutre was nice and even , easy to read

didnt see any multies so elevate on those or try to get em in ya verse

i like this Punch
I dont expect this MC to show, like a pussy can grow balls or somthin
And i'd tell him to shut up, but all i gota do is press the MUTE button
(good opener, hard hittin punch)

Mute
ya punches wernt that hard you seemed focues on a computer while righting this verse nuttin was hard hittin man
ya personals didnt see any man ya gotta get some of them in ya verse if u wanna win
ya flow and structure was good but ya lacked punches and personals
multies didnt see of those so elevate on those

elevate onya punches, personals, multies

jus elevate on ya game a lil bit fam

Topical gets the vote, better punches and personals


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