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Old 05-16-05, 10:11 PM   #91
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And i'm a fucking weed head yo! So watch me smoke this 'jay'
Then crunch so many chips in his teath...
...you'd think he was eating lays!
ehh... it's ok, prolly because I don't think I get it lol

1st line: Jay = J, a J is a joint, so i smoke a "Jay" (joint)

2nd line: Basically, when you hit your tooth hard, pieces chip off, so I said i'd punch his jaw, and it would crush so many chips in his teath, then compared the chips of his teath to potato chips, lays are a popular brand of potato chips, so i crushed so many chips in his teeth it's like he was eating lays.

Get it? lol
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Old 05-17-05, 08:45 AM   #92
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lmao yea, dope shit
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Old 05-17-05, 09:00 AM   #93
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I got it first time . Nice punch.
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Old 05-17-05, 09:56 AM   #94
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lmaooo nice punch?????.....he would get his ass wip in a street battle 4 sayin some wack shit like dat...i see alot of dick suckin in dis post
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^^he's scared.lol
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Old 05-17-05, 01:53 PM   #95
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yo

since ya doing breakdowns, do my verse against hydro
he said he prolly wont show
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Old 05-17-05, 03:09 PM   #96
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^I was jus peepin' that ish, so I might as well break it down too. good shit overall tho:

U need to Grow Up, your claims to be Satan proves your Below Us
Easy E in your pic's the " Sickest Punch" that you can Throw Us
uhhh... it's ok, wasn't feelin' it much
Just an actor, sig shows your 'Training Day' left you Drama-Tized
I'll merk em in '7 Bars'............. like 'Multiple Pub Homicides'
Oh, damn, good shit
I see u gangbanging with 'da game', I'll leave you Dripping on a Rug
With floods leaking from ya mouth...... cuz 'Spittings' in ya 'Blood'
it's ok, not the best
Why you gassed cuz you beat two cats who Half Assed It?
How you gonna 'Steal the Show'? Dro, You couldnt 'Bag Plastic'
lmao... haha... nice
See we let you in as Filler... Your goals for victory Amuse Me
Cuz Hydro couldnt ' Win the paper' if we raffled off Loose Leaf!
it's coo
Da favorites always favored to lose to undersogs who Lie Low
But when i Drop, Fuck Hi!,They'll start calling you Goodbye-Dro
nah, didn't like it much
Get hit with pipes and Flying Chairs, so stop ya Lying, Queer...
"The Next Rounds on Me"....and no Dro.....I aint Buying Beers
LMAO... damn, fav bar of yours. dopeness

Overall really tight verse. Only 2 I didn't really like much, but others were dope. good shit, yo. Breakdown mine, when you get chance. weerdness
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Old 05-17-05, 06:06 PM   #97
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lmaooo nice punch?????.....he would get his ass wip in a street battle 4 sayin some wack shit like dat...i see alot of dick suckin in dis post


thats cuz the people watching would be stupid and wouldn't know whats played, and whats dope, but i'd just come simple and use personals in the street, and rip you.. faggot
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Old 05-17-05, 06:08 PM   #98
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hotshh, good drop, was alright, I see 2 quotables, but for some of the others, just needed to word a but better, and it woulda been dope man and you coulda prob had, 4 quotables
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Old 05-17-05, 07:00 PM   #99
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^weerd to that.

and lol @ Marv comparing text battles on the net to street battles. It's all different, yo. How can you compare text on the net to street? lmao that's jus stupid
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Old 05-17-05, 09:58 PM   #100
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good looks,
i just couldnt get as open as i wanted to this week
boss at work saying we cant use internet on break so, u might see me less here
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Old 05-17-05, 10:29 PM   #101
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i'd rip marv on the street infront of his "boys"
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Old 05-17-05, 10:40 PM   #102
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take the trip down there

i decided against it cause it wouldnt prove anything for me

but it would be hot to post camcorder battle of two RV textcees

but it prolly wouldnt end peacefully, haha
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Old 05-17-05, 10:43 PM   #103
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anyway.......how i won with a give up?

no hate to high dro but, has that even happened n4?
i mean i heard of no show......
but who joining me next?
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Old 05-17-05, 10:55 PM   #104
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take the trip down there

i decided against it cause it wouldnt prove anything for me

but it would be hot to post camcorder battle of two RV textcees

but it prolly wouldnt end peacefully, haha


Are you fucking joking? Buy a plain ticket, to battle a guy over internet beef, with no reason besides ripping him and losing money from the ticket and hotel, then waste my whole day, and fly back? riiiiiight, I live in canada remember
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Old 05-17-05, 11:00 PM   #105
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you know i aint mean it literally nucca i aknow u wasnt REALLY gonna do it
it would be hot, im going back home this summer anyway so I actually could do it
but like u said, its the net........b4 real
we all enjoy it on this site cuz its our thing but it aint that serious
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