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05-24-05, 01:10 AM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
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05-24-05, 08:45 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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Jeah Thanks For Votin Son.........UPPIN'.............Keep Votin On Dis Shit
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05-24-05, 10:56 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
aight overall Marv took this i think marv may have me b-listed though so i am going to post this first to see if i can vote
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05-24-05, 11:03 PM
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Skadoosh!
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We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'! 6...aight this was pretty funny!!! On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS! 3...gay lines are played like fuck!! Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS! I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts! 6...nice wordplay, dope punch!! You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool! Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool! 6...LoL!!! 2nd line was nice!! Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion Next Time You PM Me To Battle.... .....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion! 8...LMAO!!! this was a cracker!!! OVERALL: 29/50 me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'. but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites". 6...good opener, nice multies!! da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true. like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.* 7...multies nice again, gud personal!! im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid. & a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.** 5...not feelin it....a bit of a gay line in there!!! fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great. ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate". 7...wordplay = dOPE!!! get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk". yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work". 8...LMAO!!! you got a killer line to as ya closer!! OVERALL: 33/50 ......a close battle ackrite had a real gay line, but the rest was pretty dope and very consistent marv came with the usual dope shit, had sum funny ass lines and i was definitely feelin the closer.....that shit made me laugh hard........overall i think marv came that extra bit harder and his one weak line was not as weak as Ackrite's line!!! RTF on this battle!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191730
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05-24-05, 11:43 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 40EA AE9F
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05-25-05, 11:06 AM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 21D7 EE2F
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05-25-05, 11:45 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Aii Total Breakdown Bar By Bar Marv me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'. but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites". Now thats the worste ive ever seen you do LOL da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true. like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.* Nice WordPlay im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid. & a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**  Wow Nuttin More to sayfella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great. ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate". Original Shit Man I Like it  get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk". yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".  OMG that was Nice Im Speechless Man Nice barAckrite We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'! Nuttin Specail Couldve Been worded betta On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS! That Was Cool I Like that Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS! I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts! Too Many Words man But the Punch was aii You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool! Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool! Umm Not all Dat But It wasnt wack Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion Next Time You PM Me To Battle.... .....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion THE HOTTEST BAR OUT OF THIS WHOLE BATTLE Overall Aii Overall Even Though Ackrite supplied the Best punch of this battle Ill have to say that marv supplied More Punchez that hit bar after bar ...but ackrite you waited till the end to try and Hit your hardest you shouldbe doin that like every other bar But It was a nice battle Def one of the best Ive read ina while so Thanx for this battle but id have to give my vote to v/ Marvjay RTF In any Battle in My Sig Please |
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05-28-05, 02:52 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
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05-28-05, 02:58 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Marv Aiight Man Pretty Nice Shit Came All Creative In This Verse, You Came Good With Structure As Well This Battles Was Pointless You Killed It Man, Punch Lines We're Hitting Him Hard, You Even Had Good Word Play Shit Was Hott Fam, Your Personals Was There, All Hitting Hard, Very Nice Verse Man Creative Punch Lines mostly All Original Shit I See From You Ack Aiight You Came Cool And Originals Structure Was Fucked Don't Seperate The Bars We Know Where Each Bar Ends, Man, Also You Had Some Okay Personals Creative Shit, Punch Lines Was Cool, Again Creative But Not Hitting Your Opponent Hard Enough To Win, Your Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic Man, Nothing Stood Out As Much As Marv's Verse Did Vote-Marvjay Return The Favor Me Vs Murdz In My Sig
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05-29-05, 12:01 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3923 96B3
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05-30-05, 06:52 PM
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IP: 7113 3F76
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'. but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites". da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true. like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.* im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid. & a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.** fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great. ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate". get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk". yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work". Yo Real Nice Rhymez Dawg, U Doin It Da Quenz Way Goin Real Lyrikal On Diz Kat, Good Shit, Punchez Wuz Fiyah, Wordplay Culdnt Ov Been Better, Dat ''TKO'' Shit Wuz Nice 2, Good Personal & Playin Off Hiz Name, Overall U Bought It Raw Man, Real Raw, Good Job We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'! On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS! Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS! I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts! You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool! Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool! Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion Next Time You PM Me To Battle.... .....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion! Good Verse Playboi, Nice Rhyme Scheme, Good Wordplay 2, Nuthin On Da Personal Side, So Dat Took Sum Sting Out'cha Punz, But And Overall Decent Verse, Both Came Pretty Sick Wd It, But Marv Killed Da Flow Wit Dem Punz & Creative Wordplay Drop A Quick Honest Vote On A Battle In Da Signature Or I'll Have 2 Have Diz Here Removed, Pz Out Homeboyz, Keep Doin Yo Thang
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