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Old 05-19-05, 08:59 PM   #1
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New Joint... "Cant Make Do"

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First Verse is Me
Second and thrid some buddies of mine, the Forth my buddies little brother.. lol..A little something we put together when we were floored.. Anyway looking for constructive feed.. Will RTTF..

SONG: MAKE DO

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Old 05-20-05, 09:19 AM   #2
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Flow sounds forced...lyrics ok...good emotion... Hook is ok..beat is ok
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Old 05-21-05, 12:25 AM   #3
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Cool.. Looking for more feed.........................
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Old 05-22-05, 01:35 AM   #4
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Uppin..........................For some feed.............
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Old 05-22-05, 02:21 AM   #5
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*listening*

i like the intro....

yea the flow does kinda seem forced.
..beat is pretty good...not great...but good....

2nd verse...i like a lot more...seems like the lyrical content is better....witty lyrics
the 3rd dude that gets on...ehh i dont know...something about him i dont like...flow isnt great....
the little kid....flow seems just a lil off...not much...i dont like his lyrics either...
overall...it was worth listening to...but not something i would listen to over
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Old 05-23-05, 05:23 PM   #6
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Coo.. Thks For the Feed.....................
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Old 05-24-05, 12:27 PM   #7
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Come on Guys lets get some feed in here////////////////////
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Old 05-24-05, 03:40 PM   #8
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listening......

hmmmm.... like the beat...nice wordplay and vocab
flow is a little off.....you need more consistent vocals....
but definitely nice......keep it up homey.....
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Old 05-25-05, 09:12 PM   #9
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Thnx for the feed......................................
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Old 05-26-05, 04:35 PM   #10
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Uppin............................................. ...
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Old 05-29-05, 08:34 PM   #11
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Damn 48 Views... And three feeds........................
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Old 05-29-05, 10:03 PM   #12
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Beat is dope...
but its been used not long ago...audio battle me!
flow seems flow...nice emotion on the song, nice quality,nice presence...i like the chorus seriously its pretty dope...lyrics are better than before ...your elevating man...u really did fuck

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Old 05-31-05, 10:25 AM   #13
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word.. thx's for the feed.. imma return the fav when i get home from work
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Old 06-02-05, 01:16 PM   #14
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Old 06-02-05, 01:59 PM   #15
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This was aite, flow on and off work on delivery presence kkinda lacked aswell
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