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pp2 an saaran... NICE BOI!!
IP: 3EC9 2F38
songs called nice boi, we did this a lil while back i just figured how to get it on my soundclick... last like 15 secounds is cut off cuz i didn't convert it right, but other than that enjoy.
the whole song works now^^ first- saaran chorus- saaran first pp2(me) second part or chorus second part - me churus- same last- me then saaran notice who's who^^ give me some feedback, im pumped i got this shit to work... i'll put up the other one if u end up likin this one. pz http://www.soundclick.com/pictureperfect2pac ^^^ THERE I FIXED IT
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
alright, listening lo-fi, cuz song hasn't cleared yet... Saaran... best flow I've heard from him on any track he was on, I always felt his shit, even the sloppy shit, but this is real dope, Im really feelin the way he attacks this shit. lol second cat is nice too, im feelin this, couple spots where timing is a little off, but for the most part yall two were droppin some entertaining shit... cuts off like you said, but this was a dope track for the first track on your s/click, definately keep droppin, rv needs more audio cats that don't suck... 1
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
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thanks for the feed, and from third too, but lyricalflow u mighta thought the whole thing was one person, my first post tells who's verse is who... just checkin cuz u didn't give indivisual feed inless that was all for me idk.
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: F903 CA09
uppin............................................. .
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IP: F903 CA09
uppin for one more feedback on this song before i post my next one
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Flyweight
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IP: 666C F77E
this was some aight shit...flow seemed off threw it for some parts...i wasn't really feeling the flow of whoever had that squeaky voice...i think it might have been saaran but u can't really do anything bout ya voice but anyways...i didn't like the squeaky voiced mc's flow...just didn't seem like it flowed well...lyrics were aight...could have been better...need to work on flow...the deeper voiced mc which i think is pictureperfect shined on this track...flow seemed better then the other cats...lyrics were a bit better then the first cats lyrics too...mic presence could use some work...overall this was a pretty solid drop...few things here and their but it was solid...keep droppin fam
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: F2A9 894A
ite' would love a lil more feed but imma get my other song up too. thanx for all the feed and please drop some on my next song. pz
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vanquising Mc's Daily
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IP: 8191 8B5F
Damn .. Pretty Damn tight for yah first track, flow was on for the most part, there were places but thats to be expected on yah first joint, Like the Hook, Like the Beat, The Qulaity could use a little tunning.. But Good Job Fam.. Keep at it..
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IP: D5BB 836C
uppppin.............
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: AFAF 6DC2
uppin................................ fffffffvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
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Aiming for Heads
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IP: 28AD 5545
I hate that beat it's weak
1st Cat - Flow is good..lyrics are good..delivery is good..emotion is ok 2nd Cat - ou came straight flow is good...lyrics are straight..delviery needs work...emotion is ok 3rd - Same as 1st Yall reminded me of the beastie Boys
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