Basically i got bored decided to dress me verse up a tiny but lol add some multi's throw some punches, add some word play add some metaphors visuals and similes
Tell me what u think

*Left previous feed, about to find links*


....My-existance-shined fru 'fuses' combined-with-resistance
As-life's-enhanced existance yet im in-my-exit-stance
....Dont-regret-the-journey yet the journey-wields-regret
Shields-my-tek as like 'politician submission's i-yield-respect
....Its-metaphysical with every single-meta-physical
Need-a-mircale overcoming a lisp but im spitting-still
....In-a-mystery becoming misery-yet-too-see
Im-becoming-so-ill doctors finding discoveries-on-me
....Faking-stabs too late cus' im relaxing-to-the-max-though
Taking-jabs at my status so ur boxing-in-my-shadow
....Spitting-fire the 'gates of inferno' will fall when-i-retire
Splitting-wire my fates under-estimated the way i 'dis'-higher/desire
....Exploding-ya-dome like 'famous house sales' ill 'home-in'-on-the-known
Condonin'-ya-zone n skin you 'down-to-the-bone' like rotweiller's holding-their-'own'
....Knocking-that-jgatherz-ho just a 'nervous-slut' so nobody-feelin-ya-blow
Rocking-ya-hoe and like 'Soluble hands' people feelin'-ma-flow
....Snatch-quick rub what ur 'rocking' for heat cus ya-just-aint-a-match-kid
Grasp-the-facts-kid havin ya faced dried up..dont think i forgot-about-the-chapstick (Any body remember that?)
....Ya-thought-im-messin? like 'intellectual zombies' ill-teach-the-'rest'-n'
have-ya-thoughts-compressin Just another stage of life ill-add-a-lesson/adolecent
.....This-bitch-craves-whips like pets on-the-slave-ships
It-amazes 'im not going nowhere' yet im-reaching-all-places

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Comone ill return the favour if thats whats holding sleepers back

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Booo at sleepers BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Good shit, hot shit actually, You a hot cat jus like me lol Youre way with words mesmerizes me, I knw you LL and I TBN and we at "war" but I give respect where its due, KUTGW, RTF on my newest OM - Faggot ass bitches:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...051#post2189051

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Honest feed definetly appreciated ill peep now

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yo homie this was nice but I think you pumped this up too much for the audience that's reading you but anyway nice script for real