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In The Midst Of The Storm - feat Phenom and Ecko
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This is a collab that has taken about six months to complete. It started out as a collab with about six other people who all dropped out. I didn't want to waste my verse so I got two other dope rappers to drop a verse with me
![]() First Verse - Phenom Second Verse - Enygma Third Verse - Ecko Chorus - Sampled In The Midst Of The Storm I left Feedback on both of Akademik's songs ![]()
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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listening as i type:
hav u not posted this before or aversion of it?....beat is sickness man.... Phenom...1 place where your off beat, where u try 2 many words in line, i like your voice ont his beat,,emotion is definently, adlibs are jsut right on the right words...lyrically tis was deep, not as gd as quality as normal but nuttin worth worryin about...nice Enygma - gd u slowed down ut TM flow, i cudnt imagin fast flow over thi, ur voice fits well aswell...lyrically is of a higher level to hpenom, multis in places, quality is jus as gd as phenoms, no real quams, nice verse Ecko - nice, can feel the emotion, u sound like ur about to cry in places, lyrically it simple but dope in that, quality is jus as nce as the others, dont like the way u didnt finish up all the time n u did the lil midtones following out to the hok, u shoulda kept rappin... Dope track, all ur voices fitted, i wouldve put Ecko in the middle section tho..dopenss yo.. ![]() http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193240 RTF
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Addicted
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uoppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin
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You Love My Style.
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biaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatchs.
I like the beat pfizzle- kinda fell of couple here and there, try less sylables ....flow was ok overall.... chorus was gayish.........more of the temptions here comes E..lol finally u aint rappin fast..........i was waitin fo fast..shit..lol .u got yo paste u breathin, yo accap vol was low........or is it my headphone..... Ecko- emotions dude did u born wit an emotional damn voice...lol u kinda fell of at the end..but chorus just cought u..lol but nice Overall decent tracks hoes........................................wit me in it would be much 10/10 kinda shit...lol
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The Light
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phenom - not ya best.. but you still held it down.. verse was straight.. felt the emotion
enygma - yea ya flow slowed down lol... wow.. i was edxpecting a fast verse :-P.. i liked it.. multis was still in there and i love them.. nice shit ecko - verse was strait.. i would have liked it if you would have changed ya rhyme scheme more often.. but it was strait man.. keep droppin..
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Uppity upping
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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iight, wow, phenom sounds mad different, alot less choppy than some shit from back in the day- good shit- The hook was dope, Enygma comes on this shit real nice, i feel the constant flow, only thing I can say is both of you have a couple spots where a word is rushed or under pronounced, but it was pretty nice-- ecko, i was really feelin your flow maybe more than anyone else on the track, shit was smooth, i like your voice, but I think in parts it makes it hard for your voice to stand out from the beat and I lose some words, but my speakers suck moosh cawk so- w/e... this was a pretty dope song, i dunno why its gettin slept on.
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Blow Me
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Phenom- i've never been a great fan of phenom's voice... his flow is pretty nice but its somewhat basic.. the lyrics are on point tho.. overall phenom decent but u can do alot better..
Enygma- lol everytime i hear enygma's voice i chuckle.. but yo im feeling the flow.. and dawg you gotta get a better mic then that 8.95 shit.. but yo again the lyrics are on point.. and im really relating to this shit.. your flow got a little choppy towards the end of your verse.. but overall it was tite.. Ecko- okay im feelin ur voice on this shit.. raspy sound.. ughh ur stumblin over ur words a bit im having trouble pickin up on all your lyrics.. so i'd work on your mic presence and prnounciation.. but yo ur flow was nice the whole way thru.. Overall-This was a decent song.. i was feeling the vibe.. and the beat was pretty nice.. all three of you fit together well to make a nice collab.. Enygma ur flow was off a bit at times.. but other then that nice song.. 7.5 keep it up boys.. pz..
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Addicted
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uppppimn..........
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word, i liked this track, beat is dope all three came pretty nice all three
had lyrics which i think is a must have on a track like this...nice one keep it up
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