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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 09:30 PM

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{Propain} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 09:35 PM.

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 03:38 PM.

aight fam...1st battle on here in a while...lets go

dont act stupid like ya name, this "cat burns" since his pussies propain
dis dickbrain, musta lost a rape battle n was forced 2 change his name
nigga why even come 2 dis site, 2 get ya "pussy ate" like "starvin dikes"
cause i could swallow ya hype, n leave ya ass-high like you fartin-kites
last time he got merked he cried, so im changin his Ls like smokin dye *
wateva he says a lie, fuck undeveloped kids like premature pedophiles
pretend u dead be4 u die, faggit hungry 4 cock...u da biggest dick alive!
matter fact....he'd lose his "virginity 2 bobby" just 2 smoke wit his bride! **
i dont need 2 kill a nigga
................who busts in his mouth 2 protect his kids from otha guys!


*changin L's....changin ya hair color is called DYE'N ya hair....L's are somethin u smoke
**Bobby Brown's wife = Whitney Houston...they crackheads! chea...

..Fuck with me? Ill cock back and Slap Glutton..
...Cuz I got Prez on lock just like the Caps Button..!
..Just got here and already a vet, Ill Spank A Newbie
...And leave ya Dead Prez like old Gangsta Movies..!
..Ram Ya! Leave you inprinted on the cement when I Stamp Ya..
...As I trash you in a flash like throwaway Cameras..!
..I come explosive! Bring heat to ya street thats Dynamo..
..And Ill leave prints on ya organs and I aint talking about Pianos..!
..Blood trinkling down ya cheek as I turn ya Face Red..
...Cuz Ill fucking Crack-Idict like despreate BaseHeads..!

..Hoe!

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Voted For: PreZidict

dont act stupid like ya name, this "cat burns" since his pussies propain
dis dickbrain, musta lost a rape battle n was forced 2 change his name
^^decent
nigga why even come 2 dis site, 2 get ya "pussy ate" like "starvin dikes"
cause i could swallow ya hype, n leave ya ass-high like you fartin-kites
^^umm...kinda decent I guess
last time he got merked he cried, so im changin his Ls like smokin dye *
wateva he says a lie, fuck undeveloped kids like premature pedophiles
^^played out concept
pretend u dead be4 u die, faggit hungry 4 cock...u da biggest dick alive!
matter fact....he'd lose his "virginity 2 bobby" just 2 smoke wit his bride! **
^^ur best line
i dont need 2 kill a nigga
................who busts in his mouth 2 protect his kids from otha guys!
^^weak closer

Conclusion-Ur verse needs more personals in it.Ur metas was ncie.Compared to 85 percecnt of the other garbage on this site...ur ahit was good.Flow was off at pionts though,


Fuck with me? Ill cock back and Slap Glutton..
...Cuz I got Prez on lock just like the Caps Button..!
^^nah..too simple
..Just got here and already a vet, Ill Spank A Newbie
...And leave ya Dead Prez like old Gangsta Movies..!
^nah...again too simple
..Ram Ya! Leave you inprinted on the cement when I Stamp Ya..
...As I trash you in a flash like throwaway Cameras..!
^^OK
..I come explosive! Bring heat to ya street thats Dynamo..
..And Ill leave prints on ya organs and I aint talking about Pianos..
^^decent
..Blood trinkling down ya cheek as I turn ya Face Red..
...Cuz Ill fucking Crack-Idict like despreate BaseHeads..!
^^ur best line

Conclusion-Simplicity defined ur verse completely.Need metas and wordplays.Had some decent sim's but metas are always better.

Vote-Prezidict
(vote in my battle)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193870

.........WOW. Ugh, Umm..I guess its 0-1 your way. Dunno how credible that vote was.

Uppin

Voted For: {Propain}

Propane

..Fuck with me? Ill cock back and Slap Glutton..
...Cuz I got Prez on lock just like the Caps Button..!
I've seen the concept before.. a lot.. 3/10
..Just got here and already a vet, Ill Spank A Newbie
...And leave ya Dead Prez like old Gangsta Movies..!
Decent personal.. 7/10
..Ram Ya! Leave you inprinted on the cement when I Stamp Ya..
...As I trash you in a flash like throwaway Cameras..!
I've seen the concept before.. This shit is played.. 2/10
..I come explosive! Bring heat to ya street thats Dynamo..
..And Ill leave prints on ya organs and I aint talking about Pianos..!
I've also seen this concept a lot.. 3/10
..Blood trinkling down ya cheek as I turn ya Face Red..
...Cuz Ill fucking Crack-Idict like despreate BaseHeads..!
This was a pretty good personal.. 8/10

Overall - 23/50

Prezidict

dont act stupid like ya name, this "cat burns" since his pussies propain
dis dickbrain, musta lost a rape battle n was forced 2 change his name
What the fuck? This wasn't even a punch.. Wack statement of a personal.. 1/10
nigga why even come 2 dis site, 2 get ya "pussy ate" like "starvin dikes"
cause i could swallow ya hype, n leave ya ass-high like you fartin-kites
Farting kites? This was fucking forced to shit.. Leaving somebody's "ass high" isn't a punch either.. 0/10
last time he got merked he cried, so im changin his Ls like smokin dye *
wateva he says a lie, fuck undeveloped kids like premature pedophiles
I dont give a fuck what anybody says.. "Vocab" in text battling is fucking retarded.. This is played to shit.. 1/10
pretend u dead be4 u die, faggit hungry 4 cock...u da biggest dick alive!
matter fact....he'd lose his "virginity 2 bobby" just 2 smoke wit his bride! **
i dont need 2 kill a nigga
................who busts in his mouth 2 protect his kids from otha guys!
This was wack as fuck.. It was a gay ass statement.. that was about being gay.. Please.. This shit was garbage.. 1/10

Overall - 3/40

Conclusion - This battle was a fucking landslide. Propain merked the shit out of him.

VOTE - PROPAIN

Aight, if you want to count the first vote then its 1-1.

Uppin

Voted For: {Propain}

man im RTF from him dropping a vote.. and this kid is just fire.. i love reading ur verses man.. your really good for being fairly new to this site.. u got pretty nice punchlines..and ur flow is always nice.. i never see anything real played in ur verses.. but this battle u had two played punches.. caps button, and throwaway cameras.. but overall u still came hard enough to overcome prezidict which in this battle didnt come very hard.. he had a few nice personals on the name but besides that i didnt see anything really hard hitting.. alrite nice battle just votin honest..

Aight man, if we are counting all votes in here than it is 2-1 me.

Uppin for more votes

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Voted For: {Propain}

Pro- Nice wordplays with punches. The flow was nice, and the line about "dead prez" was good creativity. Had a personal in there. Can say much about this verse, the best aspect was the wordplays and your punches.

prez- In my eyes you have fallen, I've seen your battles and you usually come harder than this. Alright you had good wordplays but the punches meh they wasn't hard in my eyes, and the gay punch are played, if you word them differently then maybe a gay punch came be effective, but nah this one.

Overall= This battle was alright, Propain gets my vote for harder punches w/ wordplays. Prez, you've fallen what happen?...Ahh mane I didnt give you a vote because the punches wasn't harder, more like it was played The gay jokes and the part when you said "starvin dyes" been said and done, but word differently, the rest was coo, with high vocab, but man still most of your punches was played...so my vote goes to Propain

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Ok thanks for the vote man. I really put no effort into this verse because I didnt really feel like dropping..but I didnt want to no show either. Its now 3-1 unless there are any votes you want to discount Prez.

Uppin for more votes

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Voted For: {Propain}

..Fuck with me? Ill cock back and Slap Glutton..
...Cuz I got Prez on lock just like the Caps Button..!

Kinda played ok way to open

..Just got here and already a vet, Ill Spank A Newbie
...And leave ya Dead Prez like old Gangsta Movies..!

Nice

..Ram Ya! Leave you inprinted on the cement when I Stamp Ya..
...As I trash you in a flash like throwaway Cameras..!

lmao nice

..I come explosive! Bring heat to ya street thats Dynamo..
..And Ill leave prints on ya organs and I aint talking about Pianos..!

Nice again

..Blood trinkling down ya cheek as I turn ya Face Red..
...Cuz Ill fucking Crack-Idict like despreate BaseHeads..!

Pretty tight nameplay + hit

VS

dont act stupid like ya name, this "cat burns" since his pussies propain
dis dickbrain, musta lost a rape battle n was forced 2 change his name

Weak opener

nigga why even come 2 dis site, 2 get ya "pussy ate" like "starvin dikes"
cause i could swallow ya hype, n leave ya ass-high like you fartin-kites

Lol decent

last time he got merked he cried, so im changin his Ls like smokin dye *
wateva he says a lie, fuck undeveloped kids like premature pedophiles

Str8

pretend u dead be4 u die, faggit hungry 4 cock...u da biggest dick alive!
matter fact....he'd lose his "virginity 2 bobby" just 2 smoke wit his bride! **
i dont need 2 kill a nigga
................who busts in his mouth 2 protect his kids from otha guys!

Str8 closer

Punches - Pro
Personals - Pro
Flow - Prez
Opener - Pro
Closer - Pro
Metaphors/Similes - Pro

Overall - Vote = Propain

Please both return the favour wiv similar voting criteria on one of my battles
Good battle
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