Voted For: sabre

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Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying//just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying! (Eh...6/10)
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes//but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!(Eh...6/10)
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud//only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves(Bud=filler type..but nice line..8/10)
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music//the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it(Iight I Feel Dat 8/10)
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see//think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key(Decent? 7/10)
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist//its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist(Nice Closer 9/10)
----OVERALL SABRE 44/60------------------
I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude//He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" (FYI...dont do explanations and 1st line=self glorifying...5/10..bad opener)
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines//But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"(using line twice? no...Hotline=Played...5/10)
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"//Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"(Played....5/10)
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?//When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars"(no good b/c of explanation..other den decent line..7/10)
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground//This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"(No rhyme..and weak lines...4/10)
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow//And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat" (....6/10)
-----Overall B.O.S 32/60-----------------

B.O.S alot of yoru lines were played...elevate some...and V//Sabre

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Voted For: sabre

Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
7...LoL!! this confused me at first, but i get it, B.O.S. switched to SOB....very complex shit but a nice personal!!
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
7...LMAO!!! these lines are funny...thinkin ya praisin them then "OOOOOHHHH" finish it off and kill them!!
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
6...decent wordplay....pretty basic considering though but still an affective punch!!
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
6...not really feelin this that much, the whole idea is good but i think if you worded it better it cud've been a killer line, but it was still good!!
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
5...not feelin it, weak line cuz it was worded pretty basic and the fact that it is on a played concept doesn't help either!!
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist
7...LoL!!! nice way to finish, just killed ya opponent but had that one weak line!!

OVERALL: 38/60



I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
5...nah...a good idea on the name but you worded it wrong and the delivery of the punch was not all that good!!
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
3...holy shit!!! a "hot" line...these are so fuckin played they shud be called xbox games!!
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Solo in a battle against Shadows Edge last year The only time u ‘Hot Dog’ is when u get packed in a bun…

0...you near enough copied a line I used last year so you get no points for this!!!!
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
5...probably ya best bar, but still it wasnt that good, some aight wordplay, but quit callin people faggot!!!
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
0...didn't rhyme, nuff said!!
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"
3...WTF!!! "sick" lines are also another little addition to the PLAYED LIKE FUCK collection!!

OVERALL: 16/60

shudnt have to explain this
sabre had punches, some real funny ones to begin with
others that cud've been better
one weak one, but he was consistent
bars of steel had no real punches that were creative
one ok punch
a bar that didnt rhyme
a bar with a line he stole frome me
many played concepts

V/ - sabre (naturally)

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

V/.Barz of steel.......this was a good battle both came wit some good punchs an personals...but barz came wit it his punchs were consistent an had good personal...his sturcture was on point....ak ur verse lacked consistent punchs that where hard hittin u came out good at first but then it declined....u had good structure an vocab but ur verse wasnt good enough to get my vote.....NO Hate......RETURN THE FAVOR.....
(Or i'll get this vote removed an u'll never recieve an honest vote from me agian)
opener=B
closer=B
punchs=B
structure=Tie
Vocab=A
Personals=B
Wordplay=Tie
Multi's=Tie None really
Overall=.BarZ of Steel.

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Voted For: sabre

dope battle.....both verses were nice and packed with punches.


ak

this was some nice shit man, personald were dope. that opener summed up the whole verse, dope concept nice punch and personal, your verse also flowed nicely but i suggest using multies.

barz
your shit was hella tite too man, had nice wordplay but you used too many played concepts...like the joker bar, oldest wordplay going imo, i think you came weak to your standards so due to better personals and herder hittin punches, ak gets mah vote.

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alright, advice noted.
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