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06-07-05, 12:42 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Black Queen vs ~Ronin~
IP: 3240 794D
RULES LINK READ OR BE DQED FOR BEING NEWBISH
TOPIC=WILTED ROSES
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06-07-05, 03:12 PM | #2 | |||
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checkin in.....
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06-07-05, 05:17 PM | #3 | |||
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Check my skills
how bout if I beat you you take pm me pics of yourself nude atleast in a thong or black lingerie |
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06-09-05, 03:54 PM | #4 | |||
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broke through many veils of deceptions to see your perceptions are jsut elementary.
my words are sweet like Sun dried cherries, i give eulogies for those burried. rooted in under ground sanctuaries them snakes are married to ancient astrology. like illuminati taking over the world from biology to satanic philosophies. you and me are not meant to be free clouded in propagandas from birth to now. from america to moscow they set up plans 3 thousand years old and we allowed. elitist society from top they vowed under secrecy to control using antiChristianity. written in prophecies can you see the future is on the brink of His property. you sold your souls away from the Light turned cold times a million folds. slaves to lucifer as venus transits the Sun plotting coups, society is controlled. fake money you think you hold they bankroll as we get high hitting lifes potholes. dont ask questions, do as we're told those with eyes know we are on the threshole. but i say to you be strong and bold have faith in God, a final war will be fought. my eyes bloodshot, apocalyptic visions as satans army prepares for a final onslaught. stench of dead body rot all over the world from eastern mosques to western watts. under shootings stars as they plot the opening shot and gas prices we boycott. autobot on my right arm dont be alarm i work for the righteous sent from above. lived life like a dove teaches words of wisdom, hit enemies with branches of olives. all love in my heart sharp as a dart pierces through the darkess of all through art. above all smarts my names Somath also known as Son Of Man Above The Horizon i chart. riding on a Cambodian oxcart tearing space and time apart picking up friends n foes. poetic flows blessed from above light skinned with african afros a soldier you know. pen and paper like arrows and bows see world in symbols signs n prose im not loco. schitzo i dont think so but i like blue roses growing out of concrete with no seed. 2 million had to bleed i rise from under their feet here to lift your spirit high like weed.
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06-09-05, 08:51 PM | #5 | |||
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06-09-05, 09:23 PM | #6 | |||
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I know it's long, but when you start to read it you wont even notice and you wont stop untill it's finished, you have to read it all to understand the concept of the poem anyways
See if you can catch the twist at the end . . . A Wilted Rose (the story of life) The Garden of Eden, a horizon composed of marmalade and crimson skies Floating atop where a wilted crimson rose lies The sun florescent enough to burn ones eyes A subtle fragrance of paradise permeates the holy spot Carried alongside a humble whisper, reiterating, “she loves me, she loves me not” Plucked petals loll harmony with the lush green grass Adjacent to the path that leads to where lies and feeble minds once clashed But alas, resisting temptation is an all too difficult task And those who know all power, know power to see beyond the masked But an innocent wilted red rose can hardly grasp the reality of the past A witness to the devils lies, and not to it’s own surprise A witness to Adam bearing taste to the forbidden fruit The sweet taste of knowledge… the foretaste of eternal youth Yet the bitter taste of betrayal was the consequential truth Feasibly the wrong rib loosened from thy breast Nevertheless, such knowledge to men was never meant Thus the ultimate punishment was far worse then death… In the garden, in the center of the white roses, the final judgment was heard Cowardliness of men lead to dishonesty, and so disloyalty once again occurred Fissures erupted from the earth, breaking the bind of serenity and peace Forsaking the once, perfectly, harmonious tranquility The ancestors of men damned our once respectable race And now we know dishonesty as an all too familiar face Gambling, murder, robbery, we shunned the will of the Lord And if it wasn’t already realized, we are the fallen angels, hells horde Captive in this life of strife, and yet poverty doesn’t bother me For the rich just sell out each other to increase profit of their own royalties It was said by god, there is no such of those who are evil They are merely like straw blown by the wind Guided by sin, but this is how life is, this was our punishment Cars, jobs, money, the devils poison that presses thoughts away from the truth Some may be led to believe in life, you work, retire then die, but others refuse Most men don’t bother to even ponder the real meaning of life And so we stay ignorant and deprived, living a constant lie Yet sometimes the truths can be a lie, and lies can be the truth Lies are my eyes, my trusted guide through life Because the reality is that the truth is what really keeps you blind Things are never what they seem, and what something seems to be, is nothing at all I seek the truth in the lies and the lies in the truth And I will be one of the few to conclude life in paradise when the world falls The wilted red rose, has heard all the pleads and cries The rose that once stood beside a group of flourished white brothers Blended in with the rest, too difficult to tell one from the other And these white roses signified mans once clean slate Until the spill of Adam and the Christ’s blood changed our fate Stained the middle white rose, and so one was painted red And not two men, but all men have bled upon it Bleached by the sin filled blood of the dead Everyday it wilts with age, corresponding to time with earth, heaven and hell And when it finally wilts to death, the world will be dead as well Things are never what they seem, and what something seems to be, is nothing at all The wilted red rose is the only that stands out amongst the rest And so I stand out as the most beautiful of all |
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06-11-05, 03:05 PM | #7 | |||
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Upping .........
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06-11-05, 09:37 PM | #8 | |||
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Fuck, kids never vote or something???
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06-12-05, 03:34 AM | #9 | |||||||
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heads i know your agiated but do not fucking freepost in here or up your poem i vote in all battles be fucking patient
ok black queen first good flow and shit to your piece imagery was a little lacking i felt emotion was good you used your words decent but i feel you couldve wrote this a little better.all in all it was a o.k drop but o.k wasnt good enough here. heads omfg this was incrediable in all aspects your emotion and imagery were dope as fuck.damn i sound like a groupielmfao but its true this is a dope dope poem in all aspects i can say nothing bad about it the way it flowed so smoothly along was just extrodianary. black you my fucking homie and heads you my homie too but black you got outclassed on this ma heads got this in all areas. vote-headgames
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06-12-05, 02:21 PM | #10 | ||||
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^^ I almost wanna sig that
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