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Old 06-08-05, 12:41 PM   #1
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Diss to SICK ONE #2

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Diss to sick one #2

Come with random quotes need to abandon hopes of becoming
A rapper got you thumbing through chapters while I’m crumbling
You brain, your grammar has failed even with a hammer and nails
You couldn’t build structures in the ill cultures of Hip Hop best bail
Out, couldn’t rip shop with a chain saw I’m plain raw like uncooked
Eggs, you trying man but with a cold frying pan just a dumb crook
Lifting hale like shifting gales got you sniffing mail like k-9
Even with cocaine your loco brain couldn’t be dope you say blind
Things, your task fake like a phony classmate don’t study hard
As a cruddy retard therefore a flunky like a junky game scarred
SICK ONE I’ll crush your tune make you rush from the room
Like an abashed girl get your trash hurled in the waste basket soon
You face drastic doom to try and defeat this I eat brisk fish like
Disaster Sharks after dark taste blood ready to waste this scrub’ hype
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Old 06-08-05, 12:57 PM   #2
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WOW

DUDE

YOU RAP LIKE YOUR FROM THE EARLY 80's

no offense dude but brush up befor calling out people
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Old 06-08-05, 01:45 PM   #3
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^^ lets collabo.....
or lets battle....


not madrapper i was talking to ice pick..........

flow straight, diss decent just work on ya punches...
make them more noticeable....
wordness but u still killing them...

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Old 06-08-05, 03:59 PM   #4
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hahah wow, that all you got? you didnt make one personal diss in that whole verse, you could post that to anyone nd it would have the same effect.. no contest, game over, you lose.
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Old 06-08-05, 04:14 PM   #5
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Tha Sick One LOK HOMEY CONVINCE YOURSELF OF THIS YOU CANNOT MULTI-RHYME A LICK SO THEREFORE YOU'RE OUT-DATED PERSONAL DISSES WELL WHAT YOU CALL THIS

SICK ONE I’ll crush your tune make you rush from the room
Like an abashed girl get your trash hurled in the waste basket soon
You face drastic doom to try and defeat this I eat brisk fish like
Disaster Sharks after dark taste blood ready to waste this scrub’ hype
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Old 06-08-05, 04:17 PM   #6
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ok look at this

MADDRAPPER I’ll crush your tune make you rush from the room
Like an abashed girl get your trash hurled in the waste basket soon
You face drastic doom to try and defeat this I eat brisk fish like
Disaster Sharks after dark taste blood ready to waste this scrub’ hype

it makes jus as much sense wit your name in it, so therefore its not personal its jus a bunch of rhyming words..get ya shit together.. you aint writin poetry kid, ya battlin.
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Old 06-08-05, 05:15 PM   #7
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but you bit it you couldn't think of this that's what make me better I came with it first now pay attention from now on
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Old 06-08-05, 05:16 PM   #8
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but you bit it you couldn't think of this that's what make me better I came with it first now pay attention from now on
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Old 06-08-05, 05:16 PM   #9
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but you bit it you couldn't think of this that's what make me better I came with it first now pay attention from now on
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Old 06-08-05, 05:53 PM   #10
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i didnt bite it .. i was showing to you that your rhymes werent personal just because u said my name.. ya get me ?
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Old 06-08-05, 06:01 PM   #11
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personal enough for me and everyone else like you said the beef is ended now you have a better understanding of MADDRAPPER'S HIP HOP for real
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Old 06-08-05, 08:33 PM   #12
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madrapper still killed the flow u gotta give him that.......

plus its a lyrical rhymes.....

ya dont understand ya still think being lyrical is all about vocab fucking lames....
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Old 06-09-05, 06:49 PM   #13
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i didnt say shit about tha flow, when you dissin someone, you need to actually diss them, not jus put a bunch of words that sound good together and then adding someones name in somewhere, jus doesnt cut it
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Old 06-09-05, 07:05 PM   #14
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Sick One
ok look at this

MADDRAPPER I’ll crush your tune make you rush from the room
Like an abashed girl get your trash hurled in the waste basket soon
You face drastic doom to try and defeat this I eat brisk fish like
Disaster Sharks after dark taste blood ready to waste this scrub’ hype

it makes jus as much sense wit your name in it.


haha lmao owned ...MADDRAPPER NO HATE BUT THIS WAS WACK!
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Old 06-09-05, 07:07 PM   #15
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madrapper still killed the flow u gotta give him that.......

plus its a lyrical rhymes.....

ya dont understand ya still think being lyrical is all about vocab fucking lames....


your wack seriously....the sick one is right...u gotta do something good with personals not throwing a bunch or words and put a name in it
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