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06-09-05, 04:01 PM
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Battle Vs Denied Truth
IP: 6EEF D6C6
Aight.....here it goes Just finished it... Tittled: Denied Uglyness www.soundclick.com/keyroguemusic.htm Dont take it to heart...is just a battle..u kno we got to come hard. Ciao.  ^^HER PIC http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194216 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194206 
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06-09-05, 04:39 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
omg....ROFLL, she looks like part of L.Veracity's criss cross dressing team, anyway..was that her in the beginning??? ummmm...ROFLLLLLLL...dope diss track, you always sound like your struggling for air when you rhyme and the quality is always ass,even though people tell you to fix it.......hmm, yea, fix it man..sheesh, but nice lyrics..delivery is on point, just keep at it man, just being honest,honesty is the best policy1
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06-09-05, 04:57 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 6EEF D6C6
^^*But i have a new mic...lol*
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06-09-05, 09:01 PM
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IP: A122 E1D7
lol i battle her for the got skillz shit...this diss was ok..maybe im just sayin that ckuz mine will be betta
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06-11-05, 01:14 AM
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IP: 20F2 022A
^^U gonna top it..lol
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06-11-05, 09:11 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 3374 00C5
lmao @ the beginning.
Shit was a nice diss... Flow was on, delivery was nice etc etc.. Only thing I could say you need to improve on are ya lyrics. They were mostly dope, but some of the bars were noticably filler.. n in a diss track its cool to have every bar as a punch... ^But that aint even a big problem though... I was just lookin really hard for things wrong with it so I could say something constructive -_-
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06-11-05, 11:52 PM
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IP: 876B 92EB
lol OMB.................................RESP
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