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Drakel 5 100.00%
KhAoZ ThEoRy 0 0%
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Old 06-12-05, 06:56 PM   #16
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keep the hate down little children, i dont want TE beef...they cool!!

so GL both, let the voters decide!
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Old 06-12-05, 09:04 PM   #17
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TE beef? haha....you know the joint, it goes La La La
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Old 06-12-05, 09:24 PM   #18
Adam
 
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This was feedback posted for Drakel

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Old 06-12-05, 09:28 PM   #19
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why u mad for? lol



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Old 06-12-05, 09:41 PM   #20
.Barz Of Steel.
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Voted For: Drakel

Wow One sided here...

Drakel took this in every category IMO. LOL at the opener and closer. You came consistent with solid punches and funny personals, and everything connected and made sense.

KhAoZ, I didnt really see anything stick out in your verse. Punches were there, but they just weren't hitting. Wordplay was decent, but could've been ALOT better, and you didn't really have anything creative. Try upping your vocab and being more original. No hate

V/ Kesse

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Old 06-13-05, 08:20 AM   #21
MyNamesGrafhYall
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buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Old 06-13-05, 08:45 AM   #22
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Dawgs a ''Genius''? Naaaw, But propps 4 bein Optimistic, Sucker
Needed 24 hours 2 write, wat? u culdnt ov ''Rushed Hour'' lyke Chris Tucker?*
^not bad of a 'concept'...this was probly your best line, but it was forced
FUCKER...U got less potential than ''Grizzly Adams'' Holdin a Mic
This aint huntin season, gimme 1 reason why u shuldnt BITE?
^weak weak weak...how does biting incorporate with grizzly adams? get some wordplay if you're playing off my sig
Tight? naw, syck? shit...u none of the stated, so dont try n Bluff..
its iight tho'....who are we 2 hate if ur happy bein ''cool & stuff?''
^thats not really dissin me, cause your still saying im cool...lol
Act tough, over 3 thousand pointless Jokes, ur not Doppe
Freepostin, so ur a veteran?, NOPE! But we can all Live in hope
^ who said i was a vet? nobobdy...and the punch was weak as hell...and it was a weak set up because your relating to my posts....get some creative shit man
Saw ur heavyweight battle, hot got you on shh, so keep it SHUT
Established mc?
dont make me laugh, even ur parents sit tellin u ''Tut, Tut, Tut'
^playing off a punchline battle? when the poll is tied right now....how is that effective? and do you know my parents? therefore, it is a fake personal and a weak punch

i dont know where you got the idea that you beat me, but seriously, tone down the fucking ego man....you got raped 4 times by people with actual skill, and 15 wins from no-shows and newbs....and talk about freeposting when you're sitting at 40 posts a day.....get over yourself man, im out for work, pz
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Old 06-13-05, 09:28 AM   #23
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Voted For: Drakel

your own level of experience? i think you were a little off when you found it
cause last time i checked, whackness never really counted
6...not bad, but this concept is getting to be a little played now, but everyone still does it.
nice record, but its amazing how you win when its obvious you dont flow
but i guess it doesn't take much when half your wins came from no-shows
6...decent personal, i feel if it was worded a little better it cud've been dope.
have a pretty unique style, but buddy, no need for ya bragging
cause it looks like you fell a little short trying to jump band wagons
7...LOL!!! decent concept and an overall comical line, setup relevant to the punch to, props
some people say every rose has its thorns, but i think its just a trick
cause how will khaoz' skills ever bloom... when he's just a prick
8...LMAO!!! another killer line, nuthin overly packed with wordplay n shit but funny as hell.
set out to be the best, not likely, with you i can already tell
cause a journey begins with a simple step....and you...you tripped and fell
8...again funny as hell!!! the laid back style is dope as long as ya can bring funny ass killer lines, which ya did here.

OVERALL: 35/50



Dawgs a ''Genius''? Naaaw, But propps 4 bein Optimistic, Sucker
Needed 24 hours 2 write, wat? u culdnt ov ''Rushed Hour'' lyke Chris Tucker?*
6...ok punch, decent wordplay in there, the setup was nice but i wasnt really feelin the whole chris tucker concept.
FUCKER...U got less potential than ''Grizzly Adams'' Holdin a Mic
This aint huntin season, gimme 1 reason why u shuldnt BITE?
5...not that good, cuz ya tryin to imply he bites or is gonna bite when he doesnt, so its fake really.
Tight? naw, syck? shit...u none of the stated, so dont try n Bluff..
its iight tho'....who are we 2 hate if ur happy bein ''cool & stuff?''
7...LOL!!! decent punch and personal, more laid back in style to which i like, doesnt seem like ya forcin anything.
Act tough, over 3 thousand pointless Jokes, ur not Doppe
Freepostin, so ur a veteran?, NOPE! But we can all Live in hope
6...again decent punch, but the concept of playing off of post counts is getting old now.
Saw ur heavyweight battle, hot got you on shh, so keep it SHUT
Established mc?
dont make me laugh, even ur parents sit tellin u ''Tut, Tut, Tut''
5...not feelin this closer, the 2nd line ruined it i think cuz the line seems really childish to me.

OVERALL: 29/50


good battle.....
drakel had the laid back style with real funny ass lines, started off pretty good and then came real dope at the end with two real killer lines which is what won him the battle. just a lot more consistent with his punches than khaoz..

khaoz...i think your one problem is with ya verses you try and force shit and ya try and squash in as much wordplay as you can which ruins ya punches, when ya went laid back you dropped a couple of nice bars, i think if ya stop trying to cram as much shit in ya verse you'll get better......

V/ - Drakel

don't moan, it is an honest vote!!!
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Old 06-13-05, 09:33 AM   #24
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Ok, well we r gonna have round 2 in diz battle bcuz he's been bitching all morning through pm'z so i'll juz let diz vote stay
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Old 06-13-05, 05:54 PM   #25
Germ
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^ i wasn't bitchin cock suck...you kept pm'ing me back, and you pm'd me in the first place....seriously, let it go man
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Old 06-13-05, 05:57 PM   #26
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Old 06-13-05, 06:08 PM   #27
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Drakel was all over you in this battle man. Your second bar to be honest, was so terribly written I sat and laughed for like 10 minutes before I checked the polls. The fact that you get explained votes DQ'ed makes me chuckle as well..

Also you're not LyricleSolja'z hottest property either, Blue Cow was bought for like 3 billion fool..

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Don't fuckin' PM me either because I said you got whored..
 
Old 06-14-05, 07:49 AM   #28
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Old 06-14-05, 08:32 AM   #29
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probly up this or something.....................up
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Old 06-14-05, 09:53 PM   #30
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bump.............................................. ...
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