living in a world thats unrealistic and if ur wonderin is it
then come over & visit & u'll see y im on this pissed shit
workin up a resoloution one step beneath our eveloution
leading our own newest reveloution with the conclusion
i was brought up near radioactive waste & aiir pollution
there aint a drug i aint usin hell....r.v can be an illusion
sick of all these softies wit piles of song files and smiles
im doper than 9 8 Miles now watch every1 switch styles
and now i just found my own style switched it with beef
now im standing back wit dope rhymes and gritted teeth
i used 2 sit down hit shit up & leave till i couldnt breathe
half of ur open mics aint even bitten it just ghost written
sometimes i think i can put dopper shit out without spittin
i've always been in this and everytime i just sit & reminisce
wonderin if im meant 2 be dope or just dope by coincidence
u couldnt even diss me if you came at me with a bitten diss
i think Rapverse is stuck wit a wack curse not like it matters
u'll just keep shittin on eachother like ya'll have bad bladders

just sumthin short i did cuz i was bored...hit this shit up homies and if u leave feed on my 2 links in my sigg i'll hit u up returin the favor wit the same amount of feed

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194640
there my link

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i did...what the fuck u gon beef again...it probably just a fuckin test ta see if i'd stoop down to ur fuckin level...that shit aint gonna happen...not my fault ur too fuckin wack ta do shit by urself...by the fuckin way..no freepostin

yea that waz hot tha flow to that waz nyce az hell good verse homie

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i dont know..how i know u just aint fuckin wit me

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aight..........

uppin on this shit...

chea good flow and vocab nice multis overall an ight piece imma give this 8/10 keep dropin and set it up for me against ya whole roster lol naw just plain stay up famz

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

aight i have no choice but ta demand some fuckin respect and give me feed

the flow was good in here.Multis was oviously good since
that was the focus lolI suggest you do 2 more verses like this.
Put em together.Slap on a chorus and make a song....
I liked how in the midst of having multis you sorta expressed yourself.
You talkd about the site you oviously meant what you was sayin lol
(you be tellin me about the shit on aim) So it was actually a pretty good job.
Except you said stlye twice which I hate repeating words