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06-16-05, 02:52 AM
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Middle Weight
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Some Funny Punchlines to SABOTAGE
IP: CF74 5D3A
SABOTAGE Even with a cab and garage you couldn’t
Drive straight just a jive fake with no wheels you wouldn’t Know rhymes if JAY-Z gave you some you behave dumb Like an uneducated chump, devastated punk bitch you plumb Crazy with dilapidated funk say what? you elevated to a cunt? Your rap voice is like a strap on a horse wet with sweat don’t front With a rope you couldn’t tie down a flow try clown But a hoe you blind and fat where fuck your rhymes at? |
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06-16-05, 04:02 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
2 words of advice to you : quit rapping.......
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06-16-05, 04:09 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
^^^^^^^^
hahahahahahah hey yo sabotage you got those beats made yet bro? |
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06-16-05, 04:10 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
yeah man i got a bunch
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06-16-05, 04:13 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
werd! you got anything with a dark feel to it...sort of a royce 5'9 feel to it?
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06-16-05, 04:20 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
i got exactly what u need homey.....
...i know what u mean....... i'll have it to you by friday....... |
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06-16-05, 04:34 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
thanks bro
*seals himself in a box with a timer on it to open friday* |
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06-16-05, 04:42 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
yes it is dope.....
....dope i tell you........ |
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06-16-05, 05:32 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
im still wonderin how u came up with this stuff........
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06-16-05, 08:48 AM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
no match this shit was off the hook like cannned bait
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06-16-05, 02:57 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
got a lot of fake ass punks if they say that whack ass no vocab below average shit SABOTAGE WROTE was betterf than this
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06-16-05, 03:02 PM
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Champion
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IP: 9681 03F5
yo man this was sooooooooooooooooooo fuckiiiiiiiiiiin weeeeekkkk............get outtttt man ure so shittttttt
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www.soundclick.com/dollaback
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06-16-05, 03:08 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 3240 794D
That was hot as fuck.
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06-17-05, 11:43 AM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Kein Witz thanks for the props and being honest it seems cats like intermental go tproblems and can't come true
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06-17-05, 04:26 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
look...its not all about vocab.....this isnt an english class.....
...okay ya verse here seriously wasnt that good..ur verse flowed well and everything was even but you really didnt have any punchlines..punches are meant to hit the opponent hard and none of those lines did that..yeah ur ok with the multis but if u title ur verse "punchlines to sabotage" then come out with punchlines.. thats real feedback....... |
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