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06-18-05, 05:20 PM | #1 | |||
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HOTTNESS!!!!!I Will Prevail (Who I Am)....feat. Ecko
IP: F160 91C1
www.soundclick.com/enstinctz
top of the page "I WIll Prevail (who I am)" Hook= me all verse = Me Beat= Shadowville I Left Feed On http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195327 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2223308 Leave Feedback i will Return IT |
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06-19-05, 03:44 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: F160 91C1
quit sleepin word..
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06-19-05, 04:06 AM | #3 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 3374 00C5
Listening now.
The beat starts off nice... Im feelin the beat. Your vocals are slightly too low, but its not that much of a problem. This is dope. Your voice seemed a bit out of place at first, but now the beat has changed up perfectly and your flow seems ill. Lyrics are good. This was a pretty nice track... could have been mixed a bit better. But good work ecks keep em comin.
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06-19-05, 10:49 PM | #4 | |||
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06-20-05, 12:17 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: F160 91C1
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06-20-05, 12:44 PM | #6 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
Ya vocals are too low...ya flow is choppy....ya delivery is ok but inconsistent...ya rhyme scheme was real basic...u stayed the same from verse to verse...I do not like this hook at all...u jus didn't spit with enough energy....you didn't match the beat song ended up coming out boring....did u tell wicked to lick ya ass?...wtf?...dawg that is a very gay lien son....u shoulda thought twice bout that 1....overall meassge of track wasn't bad but u didn't really say much in the first place...I've hear du drop way better son...no hate jus realness.........1
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06-21-05, 04:34 AM | #7 | |||||||
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I like the beat...wasn't really feelin the hook, that J Lo in the Cell line kinda threw it off for me, and flow is on and off..vocals do sound a bit low but I can still hear you good enough...lyrics are ok, nothing made me stop like "damn, thats hot" but they not bad...keep spittin
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