We did this in like 20 min....

Intro= both

1st-20
chorus-20
2nd-Key

www.soundclick.com/keyroguemusic.htm


holla.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=195762&page=2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195846

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peepinn... dv changin up tha style of words... lol hit them drums man... arabia duZ??? hmmm.. 20 in first... flow starts out pretty cool, some lines are kinda weak, shaqs shoes... despise me.. flow falls off a lil bit... blup blup blup! kinda mehhh.... cake up line has been played but i will say this is tha best i've heard ya flow... chorus is all over tha place... dv u seem like u fakin on yaself in tha begining... but then u come back in how u usualy come... pretty cool lyrics... flow is aight... NOOOO! knuck if u buck??? damn u just lost it rite there...... booo...lol

chorus was a big bring down... i think 20 shined on this with his flow... lyrics were meh.. this wasnt a grea t track to me but it wasnt bad.. keep it up

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BOOOOOOOO^^^...lol word respect yo feed as ussual

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good shit... DV and 20 had a dope track here.. tight flow.. lovin the chorus... Omen u say im a DR? you up in every one of 20s threads like it was filled with free foodstamps man... damn.. lmao its hard to find one with you not in it... any way this was a dope track... 7/10

^im in every1's thread, i give feed back to alot of ppl turdburgular.... lol.... plus i think it's funny how 20 grand is soo big headed, and only his crew supports him, lol u sayin he's goin somewhere, i never seen somebody go n e where that bites lines and flows... i dunno lol i have more respect for 20 than i do for you tho, at least he's elevating... while you stay licking salty balls.... god damn fuckin dickrider... rosanne lookin ass. psshh...

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OMEN ON MYSPACE

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Beats str8
1st guy
Lyrics are ight
What stood out more is ur voice flow and delivery which were nice that was about it
2nd guy
Lyrics better
Flow is a bit better and so is delivery

Overall a nice listen
respect
and rtv please

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Respect.

Rise.................

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