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06-23-05, 08:15 PM
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WhoAreYou?
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Schoolyard Scrap
IP: A181 D033
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196537 Fuck it, yo that punk ass be eyeballin me all day, But scared to look, when i see this nigga on his jays, See him tryna stare me out when he with his crew, Tried to front, i'm like "who da fuck you talking to?" Then he's like "you nigga, what you gonna do about it?" So i said "I'll fuck you up n tell your pussy crew about it!" He couldn't say shit back so he started walkin, I saw his set tryna scope me out while they talkin, Huddlin up like a junior league soccer team, He shouts "we comin for you", i'm like "nigga in your dreams! Nigga please...you ain't got the balls to move to me, You ain't fuckin with a punk, for real you'd lose to me!" He tried to stare me out, but i saw it in his eyes, He was shaken, i could see straight through this kid's disguise, He turned back to his set and they gave him a nod, I could tell this nigga was owned by his squad..... He pushed me, so i moved back and threw a couple hits, Caught him in his bottom lip, and i saw that shit split, By now, the whole school's crowded around, Even teachers telling me to punch him to the ground, Looked away for a sec, he caught me with a left, I banged him in his chest, left that nigga outta breathe, On his way down, that dickhead bit me on my thigh, So i kneed him in his stomach and i punched him in his eye, He tried to set a headbutt, so i hit him at a speed, Beat him like when Ivan Drago beat Apollo Creed, Nigga tried to dig to his fingers deep into my throat, Now i'm chokin, so i threw another solid blow, Caught him in his face n i knocked his ass the fuck out, Now he's unconscious i see his crew duck out, Now i look around, i see how much the crowd's packed in, Older kid's like "daymn", younger kids be reenacting, Teacher's takin money from the bets they just won, Shit there's the head teacher, fuck that, i'm gone!!! Last edited by Souljah : 06-23-05 at 09:59 PM. |
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06-23-05, 09:52 PM
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IP: A181 D033
uppin this................
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06-23-05, 09:55 PM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
ok look.....
it was a cool idea and cool concept...BUT...ur OM's dont really have good vocab or anything..its real basic.. |
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06-23-05, 10:01 PM
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IP: A181 D033
this one was meant to focus on imagery cos i was tryna tell a story. most of my OMs focus primarily on imagery.
but thanx for the feed, i suppose........................................... ........................... |
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