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Old 06-27-05, 09:33 AM   #1
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Raw As Fuck!! (raw Diss)

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NIGGAZ I SAID DONT FUCK WITH ME OR FAM! GOT IT!

Y'all kids are a joke like reading satirical writes; in physical fights I'd have these feet stomp to decent in your chest cavity
The punches to your skull condense your head gradually; Uppercuts have u float in air as I'll dispense the sense of gravity


Round 1!!

Y'all think your safe? Well Murdz the crook that be robbing banks
Could have sworn they were sketching with clear pencils the way they drawing blanks
Swinging machetes; kids are panicking already; fuckin with me? Are y'all sure?
Being a virgin spitting holy water flow's and y'all still couldn't be pure
I didn't read 50 in ur lines there for its safe to say they're cents-less(sensless) 50Cents
In real life I'd punch u kids with enough tense fists; that'll leave ur heads dense bitch
Khaoz theory, actin like you hard? the fact is that your shook kid...
Getting hit by punches is the only way u'll land on a hook kid
I pull quick with a lyrical full-clip; and cross u kids out like a rook did
Tephlon, u must be known for a burglar cause ur reputation is crooked ('crook kid')
Y'all should just book it...like calling for planned appointments
Murdz steady dropping flow on y'all heads like priest anointments

Round 2!!

Khaoz and teph?I didnt know we were facin the ambiguously gay-duo
Who know; murdz drop phat like a falling sumo, shit Im nice around the net like Cujo *
im too 'dope' to brawl; yall kids need a 'drug addiction'; I proceed with pain inflictions
My rhyme depiction paints a constriction on your skill, having kids receive net evictions
U kids bout as real as nonfiction, NaRc-uZi dick in Stanza's ass is the only time RAW cause friction
My judgment of conviction got Tekneek facing the act of crucifixion; gun applause diction
Efecx suckz like a leach son; murdz be bashing faces with more power then a punch from Big Pun
Like switches I flip on crews; sleep on views when I hit on snooze; carry a think gun
I spit some remarkable stuff; fold or get called bluff; enough?lets get lyrically tuff
I rebuff the attack n smack u rough; kids are bout as hard as a light downy material fluff
Puff Puff then pass you the L; Im so underground that attacks are like someone smacked u from hell
The mass will prevail, with each shell I blast the brass will make your head swell

Round 3!!

It's over.close the folders.behold, your facing the RV lyrical champ holder
Stressed out.?.I'll decapitate ur head just to take some of that weight off ur shoulders
Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent Mulder but watch as ur Files get Xd in disclosure
Lost ur composure...I'd snap on Kordozar by taking pics, just prove that he's nothing but a poser
Fuck a closer...I'll have these cats taking more notes then an evil composer
There's no stopping these-nobilities from using swift-agilities...Murdz diss-abilities
§ick§eed...u can forget seeing me when I swiftly slice and cut to size ur projectile imagery
H-N-I-C...if you were retarded women giving birth you still couldn't have a special delivery
Beat Murdz? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts fall short like midgets in high jumping
Rhymes bumping...Face it...y'all aint real enough to fuck with Murdz like dry humping
Evil grin from ear to ear...u faggots should consider quittin this year or maybe start livin in fear
all I'm hearin is cheers...as I dont have to collaborate with Brittany to be spittin with spears
Have my posts hittin these queers worse then angry anti-gay right protesters would do
my flows clever and new; with foes better than u; i spit then just watch as Murdz serves ya crew!!!

* Cujo = goalie for Toronto Maple Leafs and is among 1 of the best, goalie = nice around the net.


RAW, you niggaz just got fucked on so think before you go tryna be fuckin heros next time.. peace niggaz!

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Old 06-27-05, 10:12 AM   #2
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On the real..This was overall a good diss. Had some decent wordplays in there. Punches were connected. Flows was off a few places but you picked up at the end. I was looking for some personals..you had a few but i expected more...You had some glore at the end which i didnt like, and made that part of the verse i didnt want to read. But during those glore lines you had decent wordplays and that what made me keep on reading..


Overall Nice diss
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Old 06-27-05, 10:13 AM   #3
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werd... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 06-27-05, 02:15 PM   #4
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Yo murdz i thought we were down but neways....it all good...
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Old 06-27-05, 03:14 PM   #5
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hella stretched homie but decent content
just work on that stretch-ish shit..nah mean..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 06-27-05, 03:22 PM   #6
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