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Old 06-28-05, 03:17 PM   #1
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so much clappin am i at a live show(keystyle)

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hook(intro)
i see almost ya fukkin whole crew clappin...
sum of my crews phased but yet im still laughin....
if yer gonna rip us??well when will that happen.....
just stop talkin shit...and pay attention to rappin.....


ok yall r startin sum shit,that me and m-eazy gonna have to finish....
with erry diss dropped towards us i see your whole reputation diminish....
u dropped about 10 disses,with a overall total of one good verse.....
tha fact khaos feat 50 cent (lmao)...and inter..im not sure wuts worse.....
but its all good cause i aint shook by not one of you......
go to crew forumz...at tha bottom of shit is tha rawest crew?.....
yall aint even got a crew win....so explain wheres all tha talent...
cause erry time yall drop sumthing, r u first two lines gonna be invalid.....
telphon u ight though...all these dropz and i still dont have beef.......
yer crews fall apart quik...thas why u got a new one each week.....
but this aint about you and its definitly not shotz......
im tryin to prove that yall just startin and legendz r hot......
why do u deny that.....and wait..... yo fukk u intermental......
tha best audio would come from u if it was a fukkin instrumental.....
i dropped a diss against two of yo crew hell ill admit it was bleak.....
it was a keystyle...unlike uzi and interz there were writin it for weeks......
this just keeps happnin teph comez bakk and we gota war......
must have arthritis.....cause he diffinitly a LOSER THATS SORE......
cause we beat yer last crew and u fled tha goddamn tha scene........
callin us HERBZ but most of ya crew is tha herbish color GREEN.....
so say what u will bout legendz but erryone knows wus really hood......
cause yer crew dropz mad dissses and yet i havent seen one thats good.......

lol ive seen bout ten dissses towards us had to drop sumthing bakk and its not realy a diss it just wut i think in a keystyle so read and enjoy im out

livin legendz productionz that off tha dome shit that gets yer whole block hit...
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Old 06-28-05, 03:37 PM   #2
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Old 06-28-05, 03:40 PM   #3
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please stop shitin up my threads dude seriously i dont do it to u so stop it fukk sakes thats so herbish am i leavin shity feed in yo dropz no so stop doin it to mine fukk sakes
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Old 06-28-05, 03:43 PM   #4
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Old 06-28-05, 03:47 PM   #5
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aight kid cass im gonna give you honest feed back i thought the hook was nice and i lkied the structure,wasnt feeling the punches some aight personals

this just keeps happnin teph comez bakk and we gota war......
must have arthritis.....cause he diffinitly a LOSER THATS SORE......
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honestly it was a 7.5/10
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Old 06-28-05, 03:47 PM   #6
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yo homie i liked thi diss punchez were off but structure n wordplay was good!rhyming scheme was also good!!everything else was nice!no need in returing more disses famz just wait for da crew battle feel me!and we gon do this!but yo RTF in my 'Niggaz Doubting Me"Part II iight! ~1~ famz
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Old 06-28-05, 03:52 PM   #7
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werd thanx uzi and i will return honest feed and it wasnt really a diss i was just statin my feeling towards this situation but anyway uppin thanx fer tha feed ill hit up sumthing of yos uzi and not with herbish feed with real feed as u did tha second time......uppin
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Old 06-28-05, 04:19 PM   #8
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Old 06-28-05, 04:33 PM   #9
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