http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2251728

Black Queen-Blue
Fate-Red


Im bein forced to write my heart wont leave me alone
My hands in Motion but i dont think of the words
This ink is my world cuz i feel i have nuthin else
From Trustin hell to Just Movin By My Self
Help isnt needed But these are my Choices
Askin Questions but the answers i get arnt The Sorces
Cuz im hungry for this money but im still gettin secluded
If theres 2 sides to evrything then How come im Losing?
Im choosin right from wrong and this is just my thought process
Im in the same state so u cant be Taught Progress
Lost Headsets, so i do Sign Launguage to the Blind
Im Yellin at the Deaf, Then hittin the paralyzed
Starin Eyes speculate as im hearin Cries
Trust Ya Veins Cuz blood never lies
From the Beginning of time, wise words have been written
Thoughts of many come Togeather Possibilities are Infinite

Hook:
Its Not what u do 2 the beat its what the beat does 2 u
From sharin ur thoughts to speakin the truth
Try 2 do sumthin that no ones done before
Just get inside your mind and fully explore
and tell it as you see it theres no point 2 lie
cuz thoughts can be Prestigious if you tell your life
dont keep it a scret your you're own individual
just do ur own thing cuz this games gettin critical

Originality really isn't considered a style to me
it's vitality like a base drum's pound in a sounding beat
Gravity is defied, whenever i create in my mind
it's like i'm waiting to find freedom from reality's bind
Mystical flows blind transparent bitches and hoes
until further than skin deep their meanings eventually go
My 'genius' is 'optimistic' with lyric, when told to elevate
i go 'onestepbeyond' and lyrically levitate

Im hungry for this paper that why this pen is my salary
from ten years of tragedy, ive been bent torn and battered see
scars leave Reminiscents of past time
cuz my visions produce pain like scratched eyes
I ask why but the response is still silent
I wonder if it'd be a crime If I Killed Violence
Vigorously, written is key, wishin to be
Knowledgeable if so then you must listen to me

Hook
Its Not what u do 2 the beat its what the beat does 2 u
From sharin ur thoughts to speakin the truth
Try 2 do sumthin that no ones done before
Just get inside your mind and fully explore
and tell it as you see it theres no point 2 lie
cuz thoughts can be Prestigious if you tell your life
dont keep it a scret your you're own individual
just do ur own thing cuz this games gettin critical

Just explore evrything and keep open every option
this world is corrupt, new borns are up for adoption
You think "So What" so my points made
people are tellin lies ane their names i wont say
i just wanna speak what poeple should know
if we have freedom in this country then why are there locked doors?
For our Privacy and Protection for our saftey?
Well you see how well thats worked in this nation
Anticipations raisin kids into Criminals
Listen its Miserable when we have citys buildin jails
and the government will do anything to fill em
cuz homicides illegal unless the cops kill em
so stop filming, were in the wrong Direction
So long to best Friends cuz well end up in a dead end
Since Then our lives have changed Drasticly
i just tell it through my view, but is this how it has 2 be?

Hook
Its Not what u do 2 the beat its what the beat does 2 u
From sharin ur thoughts to speakin the truth
Try 2 do sumthin that no ones done before
Just get inside your mind and fully explore
and tell it as you see it theres no point 2 lie
cuz thoughts can be Prestigious if you tell your life
dont keep it a scret your you're own individual
just do ur own thing cuz this games gettin critical
LEAVE FEEDBACK ILL RETURN THE FAVOR

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Hook suked ass.It was cheesy as hell.

Though Both of you need to learn to flow.Fate had better flow than Black Queen.
The conetent was a lil bland.It was just ..........cheesy.It was as if you guys were tryna make fun a Nas song with this.I didn't like it.

Well.......maybe the reason that it suks is because there is no beat and it's just lyrics.

But my goodness...............it was swiss cheesy.(rtf in sig if ya not gon hate).
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damn...my part was short as fuck and u made it look even worse by doin like 2 or 3 verses ...lol.i'mma write some more 2 go wit it so it'll be better then send it to u so u can edit it. we definately WILL collab again tho...wheneva u got a topic holla at me...uppin this

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do i need a fuckin sig?

k-trini i aint return favor on dat CHEESY feedback always downin shit

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How sad........Black Queen is phased by critism.So wat if I always down shit?Why you bitches gotta be so sensitive?That's why I neva run after hoes.I rape em.It's easier and less of a headache.And Black Queen,I guess change a heart is a bitch.I ain't got any problems beefin wit you.Beef with you......I guess now seems more enticing as raping ur sweet fat ass would seem to be in real life.



LOL........\HAha

^^^yea wow thx fo da feedback lol lunatic shouldnt say shit like dat ova da internet aint no tellin who watchin

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wat ya tryna say..........that I'ma go to jail?

If so.why ya care?

besides.....ya right.......I shouldn't talk about rapeing my owner.

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.I'm real sorry Black Queen.I sinserely apologize for my rudeness.....and I still and always will love you.



LMAO..........

uppin for my girl Black Queen

UPPIN AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!


you know I got you black queen

uppin...........

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i liked this piece here ma... & Fate... your right, ur verse was short
but it was aight here, BQ ur verse was str8 here too... i liked the
chorus on this piece.. but overall keep it up


8/10

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

uppin for Black Queen .............................

if this aint a d/r idunno wut tha fuck is...wut a bitch

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do i need a fuckin sig?

wat........cause I'm uppin for the hoe?I though hoes like help.