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Kung Fu Fighting (Gospel Rendition)
IP: 2AC9 607D
A few of my buddies thought it would be funny if i wrote a type of remix for this song, since i take martial arts, lol, so i decided to see what i could come up with........
[verse 1] Walkin through this life of mine, tryin to allow the Son to shine But always got to be on guard, for any attack by knife or glass shard Devil and demons promotin evil, tryin to take me out by all means lethal Promptin people to break my neck, havin to fight everyone of every sect Kickin and punchin in every direction, but more come without any detection Strainin tryin to say in the fight, nose bleedin and beginning to lose sight Begin to pray for some kind of help, feelin the pain of every whelp Then I see an angle come near, the evil ones frozen in fear I stand up with encouraged will, pain gone peace is all I feel The angle givin me strength of flight, I continue on in my Kung Fu Fight [hook: sung as original] Everybody was Kung Fu fighting, those cats were fast as lightning In fact it was a little bit frightening, but they fought with expert timing [verse 2] After me and angle got rid those punks, demons comin up with all their funks Tryin to act all big and bad, comin at me that way was kinda sad Me and my black belt companion, shot after them like out of a cannon But again the more we seemed to fight, their numbers expanded out of sight Then I found myself all alone, what happened? did he go back to God’s thrown? They all started closing in, getting worried they gonna win But I saw a great flash of light, Christ came to settle the fight The demons screamed at their approachin end, backing off thanks to my Friend He told me to rest for awhile, said I had enough from Satan’s vile He banished them out of sight, and ended my Kung Fu Fight [hook: sung as original] Everybody was Kung Fu fighting, those cats were fast as lightning In fact it was a little bit frightening, but they fought with expert timing http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2254922
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OMG, good job, good use of rhymes and a good remake, lol, do I hear bonus track? ROFLMAO
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IP: 2AC9 607D
thanks, lol.........oh yeah, i have a typo in this, its not angle, its angel, sorry, lol
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IP: 2AC9 607D
thanks man, uppin this......
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IP: 96D0 2E48
uppin..................
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IP: 245A 1F1E
uppin for any feed...
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IP: 3820 3E99
come on, can i get some feed!
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IP: 404B F4CC
haha, funny shit, tight, good remake.......u makin audio? if you are holla at yo boi.....neways...good work.....7/10
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IP: 613F CEC0
thanks man, yeah i prolly will, but not any time soon, uppin.........
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IP: D7AC CF0D
Pretty good. I don't like your style...you should really make bars instead of inner rhyme in your lines...but whatever. Pretty good, I guess. Your vocabulary could be better, and syllable count along with line length. More multis and a second rhyming line would've added to it, I think. 7/10
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IP: 613F CEC0
ok, will keep it in mind, thanks for the feed.................uppin..................
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ready 4 wuteva
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IP: DDC2 B2FB
i liked this...although it's a pretty wierd topic i like it. don't change tha rhyme scheme keep it how it is don't let anybody change u up just cuz they don't like it.*plus thats how it is in tha original song* all in all tho i give this a 9/10 cuz it was unique and it made sense.
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IP: 3820 3E99
thanks man, will do.............uppin..................
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IP: 6908 B836
uppin...............
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