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Old 07-01-05, 12:50 AM   #1
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Kung Fu Fighting (Gospel Rendition)

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A few of my buddies thought it would be funny if i wrote a type of remix for this song, since i take martial arts, lol, so i decided to see what i could come up with........



[verse 1]
Walkin through this life of mine, tryin to allow the Son to shine
But always got to be on guard, for any attack by knife or glass shard
Devil and demons promotin evil, tryin to take me out by all means lethal
Promptin people to break my neck, havin to fight everyone of every sect
Kickin and punchin in every direction, but more come without any detection
Strainin tryin to say in the fight, nose bleedin and beginning to lose sight
Begin to pray for some kind of help, feelin the pain of every whelp
Then I see an angle come near, the evil ones frozen in fear
I stand up with encouraged will, pain gone peace is all I feel
The angle givin me strength of flight, I continue on in my Kung Fu Fight

[hook: sung as original]
Everybody was Kung Fu fighting, those cats were fast as lightning
In fact it was a little bit frightening, but they fought with expert timing


[verse 2]
After me and angle got rid those punks, demons comin up with all their funks
Tryin to act all big and bad, comin at me that way was kinda sad
Me and my black belt companion, shot after them like out of a cannon
But again the more we seemed to fight, their numbers expanded out of sight
Then I found myself all alone, what happened? did he go back to God’s thrown?
They all started closing in, getting worried they gonna win
But I saw a great flash of light, Christ came to settle the fight
The demons screamed at their approachin end, backing off thanks to my Friend
He told me to rest for awhile, said I had enough from Satan’s vile
He banished them out of sight, and ended my Kung Fu Fight


[hook: sung as original]
Everybody was Kung Fu fighting, those cats were fast as lightning
In fact it was a little bit frightening, but they fought with expert timing








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Old 07-01-05, 12:52 AM   #2
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OMG, good job, good use of rhymes and a good remake, lol, do I hear bonus track? ROFLMAO
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Old 07-01-05, 12:54 AM   #3
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thanks, lol.........oh yeah, i have a typo in this, its not angle, its angel, sorry, lol
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Old 07-01-05, 01:24 AM   #5
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thanks man, uppin this......
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Old 07-01-05, 11:17 AM   #6
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uppin..................
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Old 07-01-05, 05:25 PM   #7
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uppin for any feed...
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Old 07-01-05, 11:32 PM   #8
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come on, can i get some feed!
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Old 07-02-05, 02:11 AM   #9
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haha, funny shit, tight, good remake.......u makin audio? if you are holla at yo boi.....neways...good work.....7/10
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Old 07-02-05, 11:35 AM   #10
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thanks man, yeah i prolly will, but not any time soon, uppin.........
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Old 07-02-05, 11:44 AM   #11
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Pretty good. I don't like your style...you should really make bars instead of inner rhyme in your lines...but whatever. Pretty good, I guess. Your vocabulary could be better, and syllable count along with line length. More multis and a second rhyming line would've added to it, I think. 7/10
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Old 07-02-05, 12:15 PM   #12
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ok, will keep it in mind, thanks for the feed.................uppin..................
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Old 07-02-05, 08:47 PM   #13
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i liked this...although it's a pretty wierd topic i like it. don't change tha rhyme scheme keep it how it is don't let anybody change u up just cuz they don't like it.*plus thats how it is in tha original song* all in all tho i give this a 9/10 cuz it was unique and it made sense.
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Old 07-03-05, 10:40 PM   #14
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thanks man, will do.............uppin..................
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Old 07-04-05, 12:47 PM   #15
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