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Old 07-03-05, 02:34 PM   #1
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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This Is The Spot Where Hardcore Writen or Recorded Diss Tracks Go. Post Up Open Mics, Songs, Poems, Topicals, Battles, and Get Feedback and Criticism.

If You Don't Want To Post Up An Already Writen Track/Song Thats Been On This Site Already, Post Up Something Fresh.

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Old 07-04-05, 07:53 PM   #2
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DoContinue Battle
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
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Old 07-05-05, 12:30 AM   #3
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ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
Ok Punch..5/10
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
Ok..I Was Feeling This 6/10
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
Haha..Def Made Me Laugh..7/10
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
Ok Ok..Average Punch..5/10

Overall Decent Verse, but You Didnt Even Have To Come Hard To Beat Him.

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Old 07-05-05, 01:18 AM   #4
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My Battle Verse Against TekNeed (Round 2)



This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..

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