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Old 07-07-05, 10:47 PM   #1
Young Capone
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This Long Road(part1)

IP: 45DE A595

understand this a man//
talkin through rap//
i look bacc on all tha trouble//
all this cause of rap//
mommy said i need an education//
but tha streets was my teacher//
learned tha harshes lessons//
at times seemed closer to god//
than tha preacher//
cryin at night cause i'm broke//
still tryin ta figure out a plan//
so i can brag and boast//
on how i made it//
smile on my daughter face//
cause daddy spoiling her//
she aint neva gotta see this place//
studio time//
tha only time//
I mine //
losin money//
they tell me death round tha corner//
and he like me//
he stay hungry//
still reminiscing on tha times//
Ro got 3//
shit larry doin 9//
shad got popped//
i'm still playin wit tha 9//
tryin ta get out tha streets//
and cant seem ta put down tha blunts//
and sheisty niggaz turnin on friends//
its fucked up how they front//
like young gunz//
what i gotta do ta get ahead//
kareem took a shot to tha head//
tryin ta get me some bread//
i'm losin everything//
things that made life worth livin//
in due time i'll get mine//
i got a feelin

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Old 07-08-05, 12:21 AM   #3
Christianite
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eh kinda what ^ said, the flow wasn't the best in the world, and it was kinda hard to follow at times, tip: don't use the // it makes it even harder to read, no one here really likes those things, but anyway, elevate your game man
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