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07-08-05, 07:27 PM
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Bleeding Ink
IP: D7AC CF0D
Legs bent and wires twisting, he was of obscure genesis a demon built in the form of pegasus. Wings slowly stretch out to strange extents, copper veins pumping ichor, with intentions desolate. A single eye of a dark hue, almost lack but still blue, staring at hand full of bloody, white feathers. The demon was still, dark stains and the red wetter, titanium razors of wings ruffling in the weather. "I wear desperation as a rope, and have by no mean any wishes to hang myself with it. I can't be allowed life on this plain, slowly rusted by all the rain and feasting on chickens." The grinning man remained seated on the worn wood chair, leaning back, legs crossed without a care. A screwdiver rest lightly in a palm, used for repairs. It was used for times like this, when he was aware. "And it's been a while...since I've been able to claim to be versatile, was I always so hostile? Am I nothing but an assassin? Augmented and enhanced so I'm worthwhile and perfectly guile?" "Child, don't be silly. You're breaking down, that's why I wear this smile. I'll be done soon, stop your riddles." The man only shook his hand, the demon's metallic mouth surrounded by what could be presumed as spittle. "How can I really try and express myself when nothing but wires and circuits resting in my chest? Why can I experience no emotions, but feel this stress...am I nothing but the product of progress?" "Silence your blasphemy, my child born within me. You must realize that you're not just strewn debris." "The gears turning inside cause me cause alarm, it's a sound like the screech of a banshee." The man lunged forward, curly blonde locks shining, before the creature could reply. "This is what happens when I'm defied. You're nothing but my machine, born of lies." The screwdriver twisted, expertly sliding into a slot, and the robot watched its boss. His voice slowly change and grew soft, usually stoic face contorted with its loss. "My vision is nothing but fiction...I seem to shrink... I think that all I can see is some red and pink. Stab my stained, sorry soul with a knife, sever links...all would happen is that I'd go and bleed ink." Last edited by Kein Witz : 07-08-05 at 07:32 PM. |
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07-08-05, 08:25 PM
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IP: D7AC CF0D
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07-08-05, 09:11 PM
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IP: 6AF8 F571
this is niiice.vocab used iz bare strong man.(y)at 1st i cudnt get in2 it cos i thort it was borin an shit,but thn wen i did read on,i was reali feelin it,u got bare talent lik u wudnt believ man,wel dun XxXx fukin genius fo ur age
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07-09-05, 12:53 PM
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IP: D7AC CF0D
-nudges to the top-
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07-09-05, 02:20 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EF22 0215
It was boring man.Nice vocab,emotion,imajery and all that other shit.But it was boring.
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07-09-05, 02:21 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EF22 0215
And Kein........how ya get ur record back to 0-0....????
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07-10-05, 11:56 AM
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IP: D7AC CF0D
Got strobe to reset it. Should've done it at 0-4 so I could keep my wins. =\
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07-10-05, 12:06 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 2EF7 66B7
good shit......
nice piece.......vocabs was off the hook.....all the way through, real complex and you never fell off in that department........idea for the piece is nice and you did a good piece on it.............flow wasn't all that hot as it cud be.......but nice shit overall: 8/10
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